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Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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0 posted 2000-09-08 08:13 PM


The sun beats down
Upon my weary face
Erasing the frown
That seems out of place

My heart feels light
On this sunny day
Tried with all my might
To keep the clouds at bay

I have worked at
Doing my very best
And I know that
I'll pass this test

The future will unfold
One day at a time
My heart no longer cold
Maybe now's my prime

Just have to wait
To see what will be
It is not too late
To seek my destiny




Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

© Copyright 2000 Jennifer L. Garcia - All Rights Reserved
X Angel
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1 posted 2000-09-08 09:40 PM


YES YES YES YES YES YES
zactly what I wanted to say
          
I liked it!
~Heather

EagleOne
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2 posted 2000-09-08 09:40 PM


A very positive piece my friend, very good to see! Keep smiling.  

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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3 posted 2000-09-08 10:15 PM


Dear LW
destiny will cross your path I know it  

Destiny will come your way
Destiny will answer you
And upon your path she'll stray

Happines will be yours as fate
Floats in like summer breeze
All at once your prayer's answered
And your unhappiness will be eased

You know I care
Take care sweet wolfy
Love Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Paula Finn
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missouri
4 posted 2000-09-08 10:18 PM


Its gonna happen Jenn...you deserve all the best, and it gonna happen
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-09-09 11:55 AM


LoneWolf~

'Maybe now's my prime

No two ways about it ....
YES !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Irish Rose
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6 posted 2000-09-09 06:47 PM


This is the spirit Jenn!!!!!!!


Kathleen


Denise
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7 posted 2000-09-09 07:10 PM


New beginnings are always just a moment away!

Denise

Lone Wolf
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8 posted 2000-09-10 10:57 PM


Heather . . . Somehow I knew you'd like it my friend!!  Thanks!!  

EagleOne . . . trying to see the positive these days.  BTW, still have that smile.  

Tracie . . . Thank you for the veres my friend and I know destiny is not far away.  I know you care and I thank you for your friendship.  Love ya!  

Paula . . . Thank you, I know it will!

Marge . . . GOT IT!!!  LOL.  Thank you!!  You're wonderful.

Kathleen . . . Thanks!!  

Denise . . . So true you are!!  Thank you!


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
9 posted 2000-09-10 11:32 PM


I have a feeling that your destiny holds many wonderous things for you.  Beautiful write LW.
UNC STAR
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10 posted 2000-09-11 10:50 PM


That poem was very nice.I hope that we all find our destiny. STAR


What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen.

Artistic
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since 2000-08-09
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Colorado/Rochester, NY
11 posted 2000-09-11 11:43 PM


So beautifully done and quite positive!  I enjoyed it...!

~Artistic~

"Dreams are the touchstones of our characters"
-Henry David Thoreau



Balladeer
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12 posted 2000-09-11 11:54 PM


Congratulations, Jenn. Sounds like you could use a breath of fresh air and have a good, fresh and healthy outlook on life. I wish you the best....
vandana
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13 posted 2000-10-02 06:15 PM


I liked it a lot!!!!!!!It's a new beginning to start.
JamesMichael
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14 posted 2000-10-03 03:47 PM


Sometimes we all need a new beginning...James
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