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New Beginning |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
The sun beats down Upon my weary face Erasing the frown That seems out of place My heart feels light On this sunny day Tried with all my might To keep the clouds at bay I have worked at Doing my very best And I know that I'll pass this test The future will unfold One day at a time My heart no longer cold Maybe now's my prime Just have to wait To see what will be It is not too late To seek my destiny Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
YES YES YES YES YES YES zactly what I wanted to say  I liked it! ~Heather |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A very positive piece my friend, very good to see! Keep smiling.  "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear LW destiny will cross your path I know it Destiny will come your way Destiny will answer you And upon your path she'll stray Happines will be yours as fate Floats in like summer breeze All at once your prayer's answered And your unhappiness will be eased You know I care Take care sweet wolfy Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Its gonna happen Jenn...you deserve all the best, and it gonna happen |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ 'Maybe now's my prime No two ways about it .... YES ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is the spirit Jenn!!!!!!! Kathleen |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
New beginnings are always just a moment away! Denise |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Heather . . . Somehow I knew you'd like it my friend!! Thanks!! EagleOne . . . trying to see the positive these days. BTW, still have that smile. Tracie . . . Thank you for the veres my friend and I know destiny is not far away. I know you care and I thank you for your friendship. Love ya! Paula . . . Thank you, I know it will! Marge . . . GOT IT!!! LOL. Thank you!! You're wonderful. Kathleen . . . Thanks!! Denise . . . So true you are!! Thank you! Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I have a feeling that your destiny holds many wonderous things for you. Beautiful write LW. |
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UNC STAR Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 67Hinesville,Ga,USA |
That poem was very nice.I hope that we all find our destiny. STAR What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen. |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
So beautifully done and quite positive! I enjoyed it...! ~Artistic~ "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" -Henry David Thoreau |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Congratulations, Jenn. Sounds like you could use a breath of fresh air and have a good, fresh and healthy outlook on life. I wish you the best.... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I liked it a lot!!!!!!!It's a new beginning to start. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sometimes we all need a new beginning...James |
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