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Thoughts of You and Me |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion 
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I'm not thinking of you alone, When I'm thinking of me. I'm thinking of us together, And of all that it could be. I'm not thinking of me alone, When I'm thinking of you. I'm thinking of us together, And of everything we'd do. When I think of you, alone In your needful nights, I think of us together, Holding each other tight. When I think of me, alone, I think of you every time. I think about us together, With arms and legs entwined. Therein lies my carnal thoughts When I think of you and me. I think of us together, And what "together" means. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Very sweet thoughts here, LJ...sounds like the two of you just "clicked"--twice, even... most impressive lol and *winks*---thanks, I enjoyed. |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
When I think of me, I too think of us, because without you, I am not the woman that I am, and my life is not the life that it is...we are one...and I would not have it any other way... ily Thank you for your beautiful words my Mike |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I am always impressed when you write of your love - You do it so beautifully |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ahhhh the Mr. Romance has returned to the forums after what must have been a very pleasurable weekend. Lovely write sir. You do have a way of making a pirate look good.  |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*sigh* I'll take two to go please. With a side of *devilish grin* ohhh never mind...  Very sweet Mikey, I like it! (I see SHE does too!!!) |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
LGA This was a very nice write. I enjoyed it very much. I'm not quite sure about your last line. I'd like to know what together means.LOL Garfield |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Hmmmm... Yamean you THINK??? LOL. (Ya done good, sailor. *S*) |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Ahh, Refreshing, the way it should be, nicely done. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I dunno Long John, when ya think about it you with your wooden leg, her with her tail, ya need to be together to nearly make up one person.  Beautiful write. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
So very beautiful...Your thoughts are most welcomed on this fine day~ Excellent work~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
I love this, it's refreshing and natural. Beautifully penned and the expression is bliss. When I'm thinking of you I think of us together. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Your legs intertwined with someone else's is an image I would prefer not to have in my mind  Folks, I know Mike and his lovely bride and when writes about his love for her, take my word for it....it's real. They are a very lucky couple |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Thank you one and all - especially, though, I thank Lorelei for the inspiration she gives me in this genre of love. I am truly a blessed man. ps..from Lorelei..I am truely blessed as well.. [This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 09-19-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEE!!! I had heard rumors about you doing things other than kicking cats... |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
YES!!! To really BE together...great writing!! Julie :) |
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