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redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

0 posted 2000-09-15 03:40 AM

The old yellow bird sings
the only song.
And as the same day
unfolds
its rain dryed pages,
I take to my bedsides rug,
wondering for milky maroon
to cradle me naked.
Shadows could sphere,for
fades seen light
fills
where glowing silky fish swim
cloaked
in dark glass blue,
playing
forgetful weavers,
sewing the surface to rays.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-09-15 03:43 AM

and I,
being I,
am amazed...

have missed ye much m'lady!

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

2 posted 2000-09-15 03:45 AM

Very nice to see you around again. I have either missed your posts or you have been out having fun, either way This is one beautiful piece. Of course I knew it would be. Loved the following line the best:

Shadows could sphere,for
fades seen light
fills

redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

3 posted 2000-09-15 03:52 AM

yes i have been away, i moved to paradise, thank you both for responding so soon,

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

4 posted 2000-09-15 04:00 AM

Wow, this is a nice one - full of imagery and beuty . I enjoyed reading it, thanks a lot .
L.of.L. Tom .

Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2000-09-15 07:35 PM

Aloha redheart and welcome to the islands....James

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2000-09-15 07:41 PM

RedHeartAngryBraids~
Oh my I've missed your smiling face.
What a wonderful poem you've written ...
from your paradise.

May your joy continue to overflow.
Wonderful write, my friend.

You simply must look James/jmlee12345 up ...
two islanders to delight us with verses from paradise is a good thing.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

7 posted 2000-09-19 12:33 PM

thank you all so much, it feel so good to hear so much positive reinforcemnt, i've missed the forum,
thank you all so,
kindly,
redheart angrybraids

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

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