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Summer's Passage
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Summer's Passage |
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Dom Mart Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 164Florida |
Summer enters slowly Through the season's open gate. And sometimes coyly, Summer makes you wait. Summer passes through regaled In green and blue and white. She'll throw a starry blanket on at night. In August, summer pauses, As though it plans to stay, Slowly marking time, as day Follows long, sunny day. Summer tempts you to suppose It will linger on and on. And then one day you wake up, To find that Summer's gone. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Dom, I love writings about seasons, and I loved this one...how true you speak of summer! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You've captured the essence of summer with this Dom! Very good! Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I am really enjoying your work. This piece has that simple, though brilliant, construction that seems to fall so easily to you. An interesting look at summer's scene. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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