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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
If you'd only listen, I'd tell you Not to worry, Because, From here, The view Is truly pleasing. Your face And all of its expressions-- Altogether lovely. Don't be consumed By other opinions; To me, You are paradise. When you kiss me, I am taken far away From this wretched place, So occupied with Its materialistic concerns. If you'd just give me a chance, I'd show you What our world would be Without the problems Accompanying superficial worries. Believe me, Love, You are The unparalleled find In their search for perfection. |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Snowpants This was an incredible poem. I liked it and I'm looking forward to seeing many more. I did not get to see your opening post, but I will try to go back and read it also. Welcome to passions. Garfield |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
Snowpants, Thank you so much. You poem is awesome too, I love it. This world is very materlistic, sometimes its hard to stand, Write on BirdeeB "So don't judge me by my failures, only by my dreams" SR71 |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Thank you ggrn3 and BirdeeB for the compliments! ggrn3, fyi, my first post was 'Falling Alone,' posted on 9/16. Thanks for the interest!!  sp |
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