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The stuff of love
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The stuff of love |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The stuff of love What do I know of the stuff of love? Of the sweetened strychnine of its why? What proclivity flies to loose the dove? Or is it only the subjective I? Who can untie its Gordian knot Bring solid light the stygian night? Who can fence the eternal plot? Burn the senses a steady bright? Play with the multitudes of demand With constant bouquets of rainbows wile? Conquer the gestures of command Live the life of chameleon style? Do I exaggerate the view Are pressures of love ever done? Is some or all of this not true? Are hearts completely ever won? Maybe love is a finite thing, A drone never meant to be king. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'stygian night' My, my ... that's such a wonderful find. 'Are hearts completely ever won?' Well, you've won mine !  Just keep droning along, my friend. 'Drone - A male bee, especially a honeybee, that is characteristically stingless, performs no work, and produces no honey. Its only function is to mate with the queen bee.' Hmmmmm ! Now THAT sounds like a full-time job to me !  Buzzzzzzzzzz !Love you and your wonderful mind ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Reading you is like sipping fine wine ... it gets sweeter and finer with time. Your gift is your perfection of cadence and rhyme, your vocabulary is beyond sublime. You awe me with each verse and every line, From conception to completion ...Poetry you define.  *********** What do I know of the stuff of love? Of the sweetened strychnine of its why? What proclivity flies to loose the dove? Or is it only the subjective I? Who can untie its Gordian knot Bring solid light the stygian night? Who can fence the eternal plot? Burn the senses a steady ================== Maybe love is a finite thing, A drone never meant to be king. ================= OH MAN....you are just TOO COOL for school SY-gator this poem rocks later-drone-gator me |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"Maybe love is a finite thing, A drone never meant to be king." Sy, I believe that you have hit it on the head. . . lovers never meant to be kings. . . superb writing as always my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, And I love your humor and drama and everything else about you. Sy Dear Janet, Your answers turn me to jelly. Your Sy Gator. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Well Sy-baby... I got the peanut butter to go with that jelly... lets get sticky  LOLpoetically speaking of course   Love to make ya smile sweet Sy-guy later my-PB&J-gator LOL me |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"What do I know of the stuff of love?".... ahhhh Sy... very good question... what does anyone know? it just is, that's all... it really is everything... the reason we are here... there can never be enough of it... and your words and phrasing here are lovely... finite? OMG, no way... no, not finite... as infinite as the universe and as endless as the sea... oh... WAIT... maybe you're right!!! hehe... come to think of it, it's as finite as marriage #1 and marriage #2 and all the other little love affairs that come and go... LOL aw geez... i'm soooo confused... but what do I know of the stuff of love? not much, apparently ~ all you can really ever expect out of life is a sincere apology and some decent poetry ~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, What do you know of the stuff of love, pretty much everything if this poem is anything to go by. Be well Kethry. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah, the questions I have asked myself...hmmm. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Enjoyed your comment. Janet, Love sticky and I got the soda pop. *L* Doreen, Loved your answer and your not confused just lovable. Sy Kethry, You know as much as anyone. *L* Sy Passing, Well hasen't everyone? *L* |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
An exquisite write ST... Coco |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
JM, you certainly do have a way of brightening up a post. Sy,Superb, dear friend. I would never expect less. Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
CocoBoci, Thank you for the exquisite. Elizabeth, Not half as superb as some of yours. Sy |
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