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For So --- Beguile
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For So --- Beguile |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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Such power you hold over me Not unlike the power you claim When you have me your sights How you can lift me up high Raise me to the highest heights With just a knowing smile For so you do beguile. How I pray you will lay me down And raise yourself above me Feeling all your passion's flare As I gaze into your eyes See the love residing there With just your knowing smile For so it does beguile. But then the thought occurs to me You are feeling just the same Making silent prayer of sighs I'll take you and lay you down So you can gaze in my eyes With just a knowing smile For so we do beguile. ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
lovely!! well written... this one's smooth! i love the closing line of each stanza repeating, "For so we do beguile"...a very enjoyable read (but really, if i were you, i wouldn't allow me to have such power over you... LOL  ) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wil, Begin the beguile, is what I say. Be well Kethry. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wilfred~ Such beguiling thoughts to stir the day. I enjoyed this one from title, that drew me in, to closing. Guess you could say I was beguiled. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Three lovely verses from the romantic poet, and as always, so well written. Liz |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Romance suits you just fine and you make it shine in every way. Wonderful penning by you once more. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Doreen- Thanks - and you're too modest - all the men are in your sway, not just me LOL  Kethry- Cole Porter roll over, a new song for the milennium eh? Thanks  Marge- No boogers or poopoo here. Lacking your imagination I be only guile. Thanks Ms Santos- you are too kind - the poet with the lariet should be called the laureate Mark- Sincerely - I am humbled in your presenxe Thank you ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey - I like Kethry's approach... Let the Beguile's begin!!... Nice job, Wil...  |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Nan- "Begin the Beguile" eh? Sounds good - you write the music - I'll write the words - or if you'd rather I'll do music - you do words.  ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--turn about IS fair play, when you're playing the game, beguile. Beautiful, romantic poem! |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Wil I am swooning - lovely, just lovely. Cannot wait for more. didi |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I'm partial to repeating lines/words in a poem. It hits the message home....just as you did here....and very beautifully I might add ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Martie- All the while I thought beguile came from a smile yet in my trance I learned a dance beguile begets romance for so a poet short on rhymes even at the best of times leans on words some call crimes Thanks Martie DDGoose- I will keep trying - thank you Chanson- the repeating form - is where I'm least comfortable - so I work on it harder - thank you |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
again you work your romantic magic |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Paula - I can't help it - just a romantic at heart Thanks |
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