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Honeybee
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0 posted 2000-09-17 01:08 PM




~WEDDING MOMENT HAIKU~

5-7-5


Two hearts joined as one
wedding vows sealed with a kiss
one perfect moment

*By Melissa Honeybee*


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-09-17 01:10 PM


So wonderful to see you post one.  Very lovely.  Is this for you?  Hoping you are this happy.
Victoria
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2 posted 2000-09-17 01:10 PM


lovely haiku indeed.  
Honeybee
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3 posted 2000-09-17 01:15 PM



Thank you both for your replies!  No Mark, unfortunately this isn't for me, but I wrote it for a friend who recently was married

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-09-17 01:25 PM


Perfect 5-7-5 btw but maybe more of a senyru than Haiku since nature is not in play...other than the nature of love.  Does not take away from the beauty of it though.  Wonderful and as I said earlier, it is so nice to see you in the open forums again.  Have missed your pennings.  You were one of the first to reply to me when I came to Passions and I am so glad to see you still around.
Honeybee
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5 posted 2000-09-17 02:46 PM



oh yes, thank you Mark you're right it is more of a senryu.  And thank you once again for your sweet replies  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



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