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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-09-17 12:28 PM

I could fly the lighted world of dreams
that send escalades to dance upon their rays
Towers I saw of golden nights stand
That completes my passion upon this land.
Once I thought I could simply pass away
from praised hopes of my mothers eyes
To simply give in to this world of pain
was a choice once I made for safety's sake.
Yet now I see the beauty within
my hearts content of dreams begin
With a shape of a hand from afar
and meanings worth more to me I saw.
As I stand at destinys quite door
and find it open for only I to see
as choices I made do pain my soul
I understand my furtures worth,
and it is worth it all.

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

1 posted 2000-09-17 03:32 PM

What is this doing way back here, Michael? This is so well thought out and written. Beautifully done.
Dee

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2000-09-18 04:25 PM

yep, I think I'll put it back up front too...a very calming message to be read again.

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

3 posted 2000-09-18 08:15 PM

I can see your future so clearly Michael. Lately it is shining from you almost as much as your heart, my friend. They both look perfect to me......

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-09-18 11:32 PM

Yet now I see the beauty within
my hearts content of dreams begin
With a shape of a hand from afar
and meanings worth more to me I saw.
As I stand at destinys quite door
and find it open for only I to see
as choices I made do pain my soul
I understand my furtures worth,
and it is worth it all.
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know what???
I wanna write like you when I grow up *smile*
LOVE this reflection of your heart..and poets soul...
me

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

5 posted 2000-09-22 01:16 PM

This was full of strength and vision Michael. "and it is worth it all"........what a perfect ending. A very calming read for me.......you have a way about you ya know.......but I am sure you already knew that.
As Always
Jenn E

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

6 posted 2000-09-22 01:29 PM

wonder no more for it's clear that you know that destiny is within our hearts and this is where the true love starts. beautiful and lovely to say the least. I could go on and on.

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