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Open Poetry #9

Sacred Waterfalls Haiku

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

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Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2000-09-20 12:18 PM

~SACRED WATERFALLS HAIKU~

5-7-5

Crystal streams cascade
the music of waterfalls
sacred poetry

*By Melissa Honeybee*

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-09-20 12:23 PM

Simply beautiful Melissa ... you have such a talent for these precious gems, well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

ggrn3
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since 2000-08-17

Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.

2 posted 2000-09-20 12:47 PM

Honeybee
This was just lovely. Boy! I wish I could pen a Haiku with so much imagery that just makes you want to visit that place.
Great piece.

Garfield

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2000-09-20 02:07 PM

Thank you so much Kit and Garfield. I love the majesty of waterfalls!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

4 posted 2000-09-20 02:20 PM

So very beautiful...I love seeing you put these little nuances up...keep em coming.

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2000-09-20 04:56 PM

Melissa

Waterfalls cascade
bringing gleaming thoughts of joy
lifts the heavy heart

Lovely haiku
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

6 posted 2000-09-20 05:02 PM

Melissa, Lovely picture, lovely haiku.
Dee

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-01-18 03:46 PM

(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love the visions you create with your gorgeous words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, the waterfalls sparkle from your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2003-01-13 02:56 AM

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