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Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

0 posted 2000-08-03 06:50 AM

Images visions
Enclosing surrounding teasing
My thoughts my emotions
Waves of memory crash
Against the shores of my dreams
Engulfing my heart
With the needing
For your touch
Electric moments of memory
Lap on my banks
Breaking down my resistance
Your rivulet tears
So fresh
Fill my mind
With longing and desire
To drink your sadness
Take my shelter
Let it be your shield
Your refuge
Until we can together
Wash away our sorrow
In the new cool
Morning rain

Jon Mewett

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2000-08-03 07:39 AM

Jon...
       This is wonderful poetry...so very
       expressive. I loved the line....

       'Waves of memory crash against the
             shores of my dreams...'

          I am definitely going to be on
          the lookout for anything you
                   write!!!!!!

I have but one goal in
life.........
To make you smile!
~~Sunny~~

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

2 posted 2000-08-03 08:10 AM

Waves of memory crash
Against the shores of my dreams
...
Electric moments of memory
Lap on my banks
...
Wash away our sorrow
In the new cool
Morning rain

....

Excellent writing this, Jon...

regards,
sudhir

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

3 posted 2000-08-03 09:24 AM

Thanx Sunny and Sudhir....you are very kind...and generous.

Jon

[This message has been edited by Jon Mewett (edited 08-04-2000).]

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

4 posted 2000-08-04 09:08 AM

Oops!!!!!.....Darn computers!

sorry

Jon

MMoonchild
Senior Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
PA

5 posted 2000-08-04 09:09 AM

Take my shelter
Let it be your shield
Your refuge
Until we can together
Wash away our sorrow
In the new cool
Morning rain

brought me some morning tears, Jon..beautiful
~~softly sighing
Maureen

Beth
Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 468
WA, Australia

6 posted 2000-08-04 10:13 AM

~Jon,
This was simply beatiful
Beth~

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

7 posted 2000-08-04 10:18 AM

Jon*
This was tender writing.....

Your rivulet tears
So fresh
Fill my mind
With longing and desire
To drink your sadness
Take my shelter
Let it be your shield
Your refuge

How absolutely beatiful~

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

8 posted 2000-08-05 02:15 AM

Thanx ..........you are very kind.

Jon

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