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Looking Back |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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I have often thought about you and the dreams we used to share... When you held me by the hours.. Now they seem so hard to bear.. I don't know what came between us.. I awoke, and you were gone.. Now from this lonely heart, I'm sending you my last love song.... Just a song to say I'm hoping that you found your dream somewhere.. There are many miles between us, but you know I'll always care.. We can't see where life will take us.. If the choice was right or wrong.. So...... I'm looking back on happy memories.. In my last love song... (This is the first song I ever wrote, and I thought I would give it a new home here..) |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
... and I am so glad that you shared this with us.... regards to you sunny1, Sudhir |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sudhir... It is so very good to be able to share here on this site. I love to read all the thoughts and feelings from friends such as yourself, and to have replies from you are priceless!! Thank you so very much... it means a lot to me! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
OK, we need SOUND now! The lyrics DO sing... I heard EVERY note! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny, Let me get my little ole guitar and put some notes to this. I know you said it is already to notes, but I've never heard it. So, I'll see what I can do. Is your photo getting more enhanced, or are my eyes playing tricks? |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sunshine... It's one of those ethereal tunes that can sound any way you want..... (Thank you....) I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill.... Do you also play guitar, along with your beautiful writing??? Yes, it would be fun to get a fresh melody...it will be on a CD one of these days, as soon as I can figure out pc recording!! I'm not sure the photo enhancing is a good thing.....I'm not sure what is happening there!! Thank you also, my friend... I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I like it....tahnk you for sharing.....Things alway sseem better when you look back on them.....absence makes the heart grow fonder and all of that....great writing...  Julie :) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
JulieAnn.... I always enjoy hearing from you, and want to thank you for replying! (Glad you liked this!) I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Sunny Gulp, sniff, sniff. Very pretty and sad at the same time. Would love to hear played. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful and most melodic.. the rhyme is delish lovely emotional piece here... harmony in poetry... perfect!!! take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This was wonderful, Thanks for sharing it with all of us!  Jenn E |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
And we shall take it (and you) to our hearts, and give both of you a home. . . Wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Guitar in hand....I think I will go join Bill now so we can whip up this tune for you. Mind if I sit in Bill?LOL beautiful words girl and they do deserve the notes of music to accompany them. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Wonderful lyrics Sunny. Very poignant feelings. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
ddgoose....Yes, I guess it does have a little sad touch to it... Thank you for reading!! JM....Oh, poignant is such a good word for this...that's what I felt when I wrote it...........Thank you, also!! Jenn E....Sharing here is such a pleasure that it's almost a sin!! Ha!! Thank you for enjoying this! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sven....You just don't know how much I appreciated your reply! It's the dream of every gypsy like myself to finally have a home!! Thank you, good friend!! Mark....with my synth and you and Bill on guitar....WOW....what sounds we could make!!! Seriously, I thank you for your reply and I'm glad you liked!!! (Is there a drummer out there?) Eloise.....I am so glad you came by and enjoyed reading this. Thank you, also!!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Sunny1, Music definately needs to be put to this..I can almost hear it now~ Beth [This message has been edited by Beth (edited 08-04-2000).] |
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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
Sunny that is wonderful, you obviously have even more talent than I thought! And I thought you were loaded with it anyway!  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Beth.... It has a melody written for it, but I have been at my wit's end trying to figure out the Cakewalk software to record a WAV. file so that I can then put it to MP3!! When I can do all of that, then I will be able to share it with all of you!! Thank you for reading it!! Beverley....Thank you, my friend, but the inspiration that I receive comes directly from people like you, who share their thoughts and feelings. We all give to each other! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I liked this much. Enjoyed it.!!!! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is a good song, Sunny! I'll bet that you'll make a great songwriter one day. Thanks for sharing! Nathan |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sunny a lovely written poem, would love to hear this in song. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
ah i can here this singing, my what a lovely voice you have! you are a treasure..and so is this song! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Vandana... Just wanted to thank you for your kind reply and I'm glad you enjoyed this! Hi Nate....Thank you, also, and yes..I too hope the songwriting pays one of these days. I play in a duo, so I get to play them onstage, but it would be nice to sell a few!!!!! Hi Brian...I'm so glad you liked this.... I am in the process of learning to record on the computer....then it will be time for the MP3!! Hi poutprincess...You are such a gracious lady, and always have such supportive things to say!! I always enjoy your replies and glad I could 'sing' for You!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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