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Open Poetry #9

Smallest of Comforts

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-08-03 04:30 AM

I don't know
if I could ever get you here
I don't know
if I could make it more clear
How I feel
your my heart beating away
How I need you
keep the lonely nights at bay.

I don't know
if you made the right choice
I don't know how to answer
with tears in my voice
It's not over
between two souls like you and me
The time is coming
when we'll wonder about destiny.

Come closer my love
it's the hand that comforts you
Come closer to me now
my arms are open too
And the rythem of the rain
that flows inside of us
Will always be our song
of how we loved and never lost.

poutprincess
Senior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia

1 posted 2000-08-03 04:51 AM

this is pure sweetness....your words are so lovely!

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

2 posted 2000-08-23 08:16 PM

"when we'll wonder about destiny"
Is'nt that the truth.
YOur heart is pure Michael.....the rarest of purity indeed.
As Always,
Jenn E

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

3 posted 2000-08-23 08:29 PM

"I don't know how to answer
with tears in my voice"

Michael,
So much of the state of loving lies in accepting the unknown...faith, I believe it's called. Wonderfully written, this.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

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