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jlocke
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0 posted 2000-09-15 01:51 PM


insanely twisted with abulia
likely to bite my lip
oh I see my slaughter
vexed by a laconic swami
eternally lost to true will

levitate over the treetop
only to make it real
very important to me
ecstasy changes with karma
magickally more than friends
eternally trapped in time


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Love is the law, love under will.




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1 posted 2000-09-15 09:02 PM


superbly excellent
with a twist
of sublime wit. . .

welcome. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
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jlocke
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2 posted 2000-09-16 05:30 PM


Wow.  Is it possible that you understand the meaning of the words themselves?
Thank you.

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