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Open Poetry #9

My Mind

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-09-15 01:09 PM

In My Mind,
I see adversities,
from afar and very near.
Crying,
to me still.
In my mind,
Sins of the past,
at the four corners,
to rule my life,
In my mind the light
is dim, needs brightness,
for me to walk
caught in this maze,
In a daze,
Silence,
loudly foretold,
of the future.
cascading down the mountain side.
In my mind there is a gleam,
Someone I have seen,
Let me hold on tight
and take this flight into
the great unknown,
My mind.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-09-16 10:30 AM

ah...the last frontier...nicely expressed, Rose, I could relate. Enjoyed this much.

juliet_2u
Senior Member

since 2000-07-23

Posts 1125
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-09-16 04:09 PM

Ah Rose the scary land of our minds and you have portrayed it well here.
Juls

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2000-09-16 04:34 PM

A journey through "MY" mind is like a journey through hell.lol...lovely write my friend as you pour forth from the depths of your soul as seen by your minds eye.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

4 posted 2000-09-16 05:07 PM

I know the feelings well . I think you were in my mind. I look forward to reading more of your work

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

5 posted 2000-09-17 12:11 PM

thx serenity, Mark, Alan,and Juls
The mind is a terrible thing to waste! But hey I only live once.. lol maybe twice but that's another story.

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