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BirdeeB
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 106
USA

0 posted 2000-09-16 11:39 PM


grasp to control yourself
I shout!
Into the wind of deceptiom
How could I be so vulnerable
to the decisions of dreams
Passing through the mirrors into
my demension, my world.
Is it true that you have decieved me?
I ask my reflection
You told me lies, could I ever
trust you?
Need I trust you...


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Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-09-17 12:07 PM


trust once broken is hard to replace.  Wonderful writting.
Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362
2 posted 2000-09-17 01:45 AM


Uhoh, second guessing yourself... GO with your first instinct, babe. Always the best answer. Surround yourself with friends, work hard and forget he or she ever existed. Makes those around you more likely to respect you, too.
Best of luck
~Cuddlez~

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

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