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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Tender loins of Zeus, Burden by the weight of few, Shattering of light, Ocean takes the flight, Decibels of love, Grazing with the ocean above, Forming of this place Followed by the tying of time lace. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
WOW...love the last line never say never |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! man oh man, this is one of your best nox. truly. i gotta read that again...... kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
i have to admit that i had to read this a few times before it clicked in my head...{{ jnr smacks his forehead}} beautiful read xeonox..loved the imagery  and time lace...nice word  "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I, too, enjoyed this much, and I, too, really like the ending line. jwesley |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
You guys spoil me with your responses. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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