Open Poetry #9 |
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For Life |
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Brandyn Sand Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 82Columbia, SC ![]() |
For Life is what those dying pray, What firemen risk their own to save, That which doctors strive to aid And brand new parents celebrate. For Life is what the elderly long, Scientists wish they could prolong, Patriots give for freedom’s sake, Geneticists slave to recreate. For Life is what all rescuers search; A gift God gave us all on earth. So priceless, precious, and I hope you see Its the kind of friend you have in me. (For B, my dear friend for life. Until you see the light at the end of the tunnel on your own, and believe me it’s there, here’s hoping my concern & support will be, at the very least, a candle along your path.) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
What a wonderful poem of support for your friend!! I'm sure this will help them, just knowing they have you and you care. I enjoyed reading your work!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brandyn, this is wonderful! That we should all have a friend like you... |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
when i first read the poem i thought it was fantasicly beautiful, then i read your side note..or rather footnote ...and it is truly superb that a freind like you would write such a hearfelt poem...i send you and your friend my best wishes..stay strong ![]() "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Brandyn, this is an excellent flowing tribute... lovely work indeed! regards, sudhir |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes in truth life is very precious yet at times we fail to appreciate the beauty of life...nice thoughts from you...James |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"For life..." is precious indeed, and to give oneself, as you, is a precious gift to bestow. Very well written, jwesley |
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