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Brandyn Sand
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since 2000-04-21
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Columbia, SC

0 posted 2000-08-25 11:09 AM


For Life is what those dying pray,
What firemen risk their own to save,
That which doctors strive to aid
And brand new parents celebrate.

For Life is what the elderly long,
Scientists wish they could prolong,
Patriots give for freedom’s sake,
Geneticists slave to recreate.

For Life is what all rescuers search;
A gift God gave us all on earth.
So priceless, precious, and I hope you see
Its the kind of friend you have in me.


(For B, my dear friend for life.  Until you see the light at the end of the tunnel on your own, and believe me it’s there, here’s hoping my concern & support will be, at the very least, a candle along your path.)




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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-08-25 11:22 AM



  What a wonderful poem of support for your friend!!  I'm sure this will help them, just knowing they have you and you care.  I enjoyed reading your work!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2000-08-25 12:25 PM


Brandyn, this is wonderful! That we should all have a friend like you...
JnR4eva
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since 2000-08-07
Posts 377
Bronx, NY
3 posted 2000-08-25 12:38 PM


when i first read the poem i thought it was fantasicly beautiful, then i read your side note..or rather footnote ...and it is truly superb  that a freind like you would write such a hearfelt poem...i send you and your friend my best wishes..stay strong  

"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- me



Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
4 posted 2000-08-25 12:39 PM


Brandyn,
this is an excellent flowing tribute...

lovely work indeed!

regards,
sudhir

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2000-08-25 01:55 PM


Yes in truth life is very precious yet at times we fail to appreciate the beauty of life...nice thoughts from you...James
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
6 posted 2000-08-25 01:57 PM


"For life..." is precious indeed, and to give oneself, as you, is a precious gift to bestow.

Very well written,

jwesley

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