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Open Poetry #9

Turning Tide .

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

0 posted 2000-09-15 05:39 AM

Turning Tide .

As I look out at the sea,
It's deepest opal blue,
The white contrast,
Of waves so fierce,
Yet calm,
As if in a divine queue,
Am I to,
In the queue,
Waiting for my turn,
The water flows,
Falls crash down,
In floods of white'y blue,
And every tear I shed,
They also seem to queue,
But rapidly this water flows,
Sometimes two by two,
I wish these tears of happiness,
But when I'm near to you,
I know this holy water,
Is long and wrong,
But true .

Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

1 posted 2000-09-15 05:44 AM

I enjoyed your poem, it seemed to read itself to me. (That probably sounds odd, but I can't explain it any better.)

Dee

poutprincess
Senior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia

2 posted 2000-09-15 06:05 AM

this is very nice...and soothing.
~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

3 posted 2000-09-26 08:47 AM

Thankyou very much, your words are very kind and very sweet . I don't deserve such kind words and such great freinds

Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2000-10-03 03:45 PM

Very gentle writing...James

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

5 posted 2000-10-05 02:27 PM

Thankyou very much James, I wrote this one while looking out over the sea, when I was very depressed, but your reply has made life much more of a beach . ( don't know if you use that term in America, it means a fun easy life if life's a beach ) . Ta a lot .

L.of.L. Tom .

Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

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