Open Poetry #9 |
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If you don't look you will never know!! |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
Look at the roof with its hairline cracks, look at the walls were wallpaper lacks. Look at the world through rosey coloured shades, Look at all the mess you and i made. We put on our coats after the rain, we take our medicine after the pain. We make the change to stay the same, We commit the crime to take the blame. Look at the sun through the morning cloud, look at world as it spins round and round. Take me in your arms, let me know you care. A day might come when i'm not there. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Collin, I believe this is the first of yours I've read, and I like what I see! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Collins, this is wonderful! I like it a lot. |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
thankyou. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Take me in your arms, let me know you care. A day might come when i'm not there. A lovely poem collins, especially loved the last 2 lines ![]() |
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