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Collins
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0 posted 2000-08-10 09:18 PM


Look at the roof with its hairline cracks,
look at the walls were wallpaper lacks.
Look at the world through rosey coloured shades,
Look at all the mess you and i made.

We put on our coats after the rain,
we take our medicine after the pain.
We make the change to stay the same,
We commit the crime to take the blame.

Look at the sun through the morning cloud,
look at world as it spins round and round.
Take me in your arms, let me know you care.
A day might come when i'm not there.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-08-10 09:26 PM


Collin, I believe this is the first of yours I've read, and I like what I see!
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-08-10 09:35 PM


Collins, this is wonderful! I like it a lot.
Collins
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3 posted 2000-08-11 04:52 PM


thankyou.
Dark Angel
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4 posted 2000-10-04 09:54 PM


Take me in your arms, let me know you care.
A day might come when i'm not there.


A lovely poem collins, especially loved the last 2 lines  

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