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Never To Far |
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Cheryl Flemming Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 102 |
Though you are far away I feel your love night and day I hear your voice in the wind Carrying the words our love will never end When I look up into the sky It's like looking into your beautiful eyes When a gentle breeze crosses my face I feel your kiss and a warm embrace When I need you I just reach out and touch you I feel your love surround me Feeling safe in your arms When I fall asleep everynight Your dreams are my dreams You know my heart from deep within I promise you my love till the end Your Love has filled my heart, mind and soul Hold onto me, never let go You will never be alone I will always be there, near or far Never to far Only a heartbeat away. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a very nice entree into Passions, Cheryl...Welcome, you're going to love it here... Check your email for a special greeting..  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Cheryl* This is absolutely beautiful!! You have spoken words to my heart tonight...thank you so very very much! Welcome to Passions and I hope to read many more from your pen in the future. This one will most definately be added to my library to visit many times~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cheryl~ Welcome to the wonderful world of Passions. Enjoyed your entrance. Please take the time to enjoy the work of many talented writers here. We're fun .. you're gonna love us ! Glad to have you in our 'family.' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Very nice first work. Hope this person who is never "Too far away" isn't dead and you get to see them soon. Sounds like you really love him/her. Again, welcome to Passions  ).Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Welcome to Passions and what a PERFECT verse to start out with. This one hits home for me as my love and I are living every word of this right now but we are smiling knowing the touch and knowing what is to come very soon. Beautiful write.  |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Cheryl, firstly what a lovely piece, straight from the heart. Secondly, welcome to Passions. This is a great place filled with wonderful people. Dee |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Welcome to our world...this is certainly a beautiful way of making an entrance. |
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Cheryl Flemming Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 102 |
Thank you everyone for the warm welcome.I do like it here. So much different from other forums I have been to.I have never been welcomed with such a sweet email.I love it here already. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Cheryl, welcome to the wonderful family of Passions...Outstanding poem. I'll be looking for more of your work. Again welcome aboard. Juls [This message has been edited by juliet_2u (edited 09-15-2000).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Cheryl, This poem does touch my heart. The one that I love can't be here right now.. (he lives in another state at the moment). I am going to send him this poem.. it expresses so well what we feel. I look forward to reading more of your writing rp25 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Cheryl. . . wonderful first poem!!! I love the word play with "Never to far". . . simply inspired. . . Welcome. . . and I hope to see more of your work. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cheryl, Welcome and enjoyed your work. |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
Cheryl, Welcome to Passions ........Love the emotion in your poem. i by no means consider myself an expert or barely more than adequate. I would only suggest using spacing and physical breaks in your poem to help the reader know how you intend it to be read. LOL, helps the slow readers like myself. Again, .......... Welcome. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Beautiful! Very touching. Look forward to reading more of your poetry. Deb |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to the forum! I enjoyed this, i was so honest and refreshing. Looking forward to reading more from you. Kathleen |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Welcome Simply beautiful. Love is the law, love under will. |
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