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Cheryl Flemming
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since 2000-09-14
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0 posted 2000-09-14 11:14 PM



Though you are far away
I feel your love night and day
I hear your voice in the wind
Carrying the words our love will never end
When I look up into the sky
It's like looking into your beautiful eyes
When a gentle breeze crosses my face
I feel your kiss and a warm embrace
When I need you
I just reach out and touch you
I feel your love surround me
Feeling safe in your arms
When I fall asleep everynight
Your dreams are my dreams
You know my heart from deep within
I promise you my love till the end
Your Love has filled my heart, mind and soul
Hold onto me, never let go
You will never be alone
I will always be there, near or far
Never to far
Only a heartbeat away.


© Copyright 2000 Cheryl Flemming - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2000-09-14 11:18 PM


This is a very nice entree into Passions, Cheryl...Welcome, you're going to love it here... Check your email for a special greeting..
Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
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2 posted 2000-09-14 11:20 PM


Cheryl*
This is absolutely beautiful!! You have
spoken words to my heart tonight...thank you
so very very much!  Welcome to Passions and
I hope to read many more from your pen in
the future.  This one will most definately
be added to my library to visit many times~

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2000-09-14 11:22 PM


Cheryl~
Welcome to the wonderful world of Passions.
Enjoyed your entrance.
Please take the time to enjoy the work of
many talented writers here.
We're fun .. you're gonna love us !
Glad to have you in our 'family.'
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362
4 posted 2000-09-14 11:58 PM


Very nice first work. Hope this person who is never "Too far away" isn't dead and you get to see them soon. Sounds like you really love him/her. Again, welcome to Passions ).

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
5 posted 2000-09-15 04:33 AM


Welcome to Passions and what a PERFECT verse to start out with.  This one hits home for me as my love and I are living every word of this right now but we are smiling knowing the touch and knowing what is to come very soon.  Beautiful write.
Dee
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia
6 posted 2000-09-15 05:04 AM


Cheryl, firstly what a lovely piece, straight from the heart. Secondly, welcome to Passions. This is a great place filled with wonderful people.
Dee

Paula Finn
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missouri
7 posted 2000-09-15 12:49 PM


Welcome to our world...this is certainly a beautiful way of making an entrance.
Cheryl Flemming
Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 102

8 posted 2000-09-15 08:56 PM


Thank you everyone for the warm welcome.I do like it here. So much different from other forums I have been to.I have never been welcomed with such a sweet email.I love it here already.
juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
9 posted 2000-09-15 09:04 PM


Cheryl, welcome to the wonderful family of Passions...Outstanding poem. I'll be looking for more of your work. Again welcome aboard.
Juls




[This message has been edited by juliet_2u (edited 09-15-2000).]

rosepetals25
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10 posted 2000-09-15 09:07 PM


Cheryl,

    This poem does touch my heart.  The one that I love can't be here right now.. (he lives in another state at the moment).  I am going to send him this poem.. it expresses so well what we feel. I look forward to reading more of your writing

                      rp25

Sven
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11 posted 2000-09-15 09:11 PM


Cheryl. . . wonderful first poem!!!

I love the word play with "Never to far". . . simply inspired. . .

Welcome. . . and I hope to see more of your work. . .

----------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
12 posted 2000-09-15 09:20 PM


Cheryl,
Welcome and enjoyed your work.

The Lonely Stranger
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 361
Upstate, NY, USA
13 posted 2000-09-15 09:26 PM


Cheryl,
     Welcome to Passions ........Love the emotion in your poem. i by no means consider myself an expert or barely more than adequate. I would only suggest using spacing and physical breaks in your poem to help the reader know how you intend it to be read. LOL, helps the slow readers like myself.

Again, .......... Welcome.

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
14 posted 2000-09-15 11:19 PM


Beautiful! Very touching.
Look forward to reading more of your poetry.

Deb  

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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15 posted 2000-09-16 08:54 PM


Welcome to the forum! I enjoyed this, i was so honest and refreshing. Looking forward to reading more from you.

Kathleen


jlocke
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since 2000-09-10
Posts 169
CC,TX
16 posted 2000-09-16 09:11 PM


Welcome
Simply beautiful.


Love is the law, love under will.



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