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Demon's Craft (nobody's fault but mine...)
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Demon's Craft (nobody's fault but mine...) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Reckoning-- reclusive me. Beautiful in beckoning. Whistling whispered Siren's Song, wrestling right from strong-armed wrong. Ritual of ruthless need. Fettered flesh-- a bargain's bleed. (Melancholy) mocking me... poppies' pull-- the Demon Seed... Here is where desires dwell, famined feast, to never fill... I welcome you to gates of Hell, every stone, satanic spell... A Demon's craft to have last laugh-- a chain of pain designed by me... [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 09-15-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I'll never forget the words that you posted on one of my very first poems.... "serenity weeps" I replied "Butterflies Dries"....I'm still here to dry...even as I weep...this one hurt baby~ Love you! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Here is where desire dwells, famined feast, to never fill... I welcome you to gates of Hell, every stone, satanic spell... Serenity, how this one aches, I am with BDC on this one. Excellent piece and I hope that you find your serenity... take care peace This is the hour when the mysteries emerge A strangeness so hard to reflect A moment so moving goes straight to your heart" JOy divison |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Hi serenity (you sneaky little witch) ... Casting spells again, i see ... well done ... your work is evolving ... My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Ears to listen Shoulders to lend Hands to soothe No words to mend |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ah, Serenity, no one but you could make the gates of Hell sound so inviting..... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Holly---my heart, I am so grateful for the company of butterflies--thank you much for the conversation, and the sheer joy of watching a butterfly flitter....serenity sighs...love ya, to both me girlies..... Brian---I always have to backspace on your name---I keep typing you as "Brain"---no need to page Dr. Freud---and, HEY, you seem to be writing with everybody but ME!!! Pick me next! OOOooooh! Pick me? grins...and thanks. Mark----big biting grin now---I've been called much worse than a sneaky witch---but the worst, I think, is not to have been called at all...(ahem...) thanks for the comp, as I know that you are a studious and talented poet...and yes, you are a cherished part of Passion's Pet Poets! MI------methinks you understand...and that is what I strive for...I thank you. M'deer--I thought of you, believe or not, BEFORE I posted this one...counted every frigging syllable! and no, not classic poetry, but hopefully, classic me---and I am so grateful for your kindness, always, ever...and BTW---the gates of hell? They are always appealing...otherwise, there would be no temperance of the soul? Hugs. thank you all...I'm off to read... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
candles burn down and glow in blue theres no one I'd rather be hexed by than you. cast your spell ... send your incantation theres nothing sweeter than a serenity imprecation. I've no fear ... your not pernicious I know your heart ... its venial and solicitous. Exotic ... erotic ... prophetic ... poetic ... let the dance begin. Speak the chant ... get under their skin. ritual ... habitual confession ... obsession give them back their misery. weave your web ... they wont break free. emanate ... elucidate ... mystic ... cryptic design your tapestry lift the veil ... solve the mystery abregation ... recantation ... debacle ... debase ... this ... they always do. But they wont soon forget ... the night they crossed you.    *winkie winkie* I TOLD you there was a full moon  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I Have GOT TO GET ME SOME....raspberry tea? That is what it is, isn't it, Janet?...uh...Janet!? ...HEY...Bring that mug over here! (BRB...!!!!) |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
super intense lady friend, hold strong, you amazing poet. the water is the moment, the fire is the alchemist. i loved your poem. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Spell is cast Hex is done Heaven wont last For the one you shun Such a chant In which you tell Upon him you grant A pass to hell Painful read and now it is time to go find my shell before your chant finds ME and sends cowboy straight to hell. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O Serene One, This is GRAND poetry... regards, sudhir |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to the guys, Mark Angelheart and me good bud, Sudhir...and redheart...just where have you been? You made my day, just by showing up! |
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