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Full Moon Beguile
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Full Moon Beguile |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Full Moon Beguile A sunset colored with crape myrtle pressed like silk on blue at first stayed while I sat down to watch it drain behind the palm tree’s burst I thought no beauty could surpass it and turned to you to speak my view but you looked passed with eyes celestial and dreamy with the moonlight’s hew. I watched it scale a square of building dissected by a telephone pole then climb the open angel’s stairway to rule the sky and light my soul. I knew you thought of how your Gaga loved to lay with you out back when you were just a little fella and explain its dark and glorious trek. For when the moon is at the full I see her climb into your face almost hear her voice like music and feel the warmth of her embrace. The moon at full has all the glory of the smile that touched the child and changed forever all the meaning of the night’s full moon beguile. |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It's just amazing how we never seem to run out of "full moon" stories, isn't it? This one is great, Martie..  |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Martie - While at the cottage way south on the Chesapeake - the one predominant tree/shrub - seemed to be Crape Myrtle- and it was glorious ~S~ It was there too I had the luxury of enjoying the splendor of the mmon as I've been denied too long - this was beautiful - you should rhyme more often |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
You never cease to enchant us Martie...lovely, as usual jwesley |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Martie You are wonderful Liz |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, the full moon, my most loved thing of beauty. This was great, thanks. Catalinamoon |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
The moon at full has all the glory of the smile that touched the child and changed forever all the meaning of the night’s full moon beguile. Martie a very beautiful scene This is the hour when the mysteries emerge A strangeness so hard to reflect A moment so moving goes straight to your heart" JOy divison |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ah, there is no one I would rather be mooned by than you, Martie. er, that didn't come out right...I mean, the stories you build under a moon are always very special  |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
I'll never tire of the beautiful paintings you brush with that pen Martie. This is simply incredible. Bonnie |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
**sighs** a beautiful glow you dance under! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ I love it when you do that moon thang !  Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I loved it..sooo pretty.. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*sigh* I adore the moon and all her magic ~Heather |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I thought no beauty could surpass it and turned to you to speak my view but you looked passed with eyes celestial and dreamy with the moonlight’s hew. =================== For when the moon is at the full I see her climb into your face almost hear her voice like music and feel the warmth of her embrace. The moon at full has all the glory of the smile that touched the child and changed forever all the meaning of the night’s full moon beguile. ===================== I could kiss ya for this one... i needed this tonite ... like no body knows... and the rhyme I crave was like kissing the moon... this is absolutely awesome ... thank you for its grace... love you, miss you me |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Absoluletly beautiful my friend. SO why didn't we think of the moon over the Kern anyway? OOPPPssss don't want to give it away now do I? Your words always paint with a magical brush and this one was highlighted from the heaven's. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Great one, I loved reading it. Thanks for writing it, and as long as you keep writeing I'll keep reading . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Stunning poetry, Martie, my friend... absolutely stunning... regards, sudhir |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Nan--as long as there is a moon, there will be poems written to it. Thank you for reading mine. Bill--something about the name Chesapeake sounds so beautiful, maybe it is the moon and crape myrtle...or could it be the ocean. Thanks for liking this rhymed verse. jwesley--thank you for letting me know about enchantment...what a lovely thing to say. Liz--you are wonderful! catalinamoon--with a name like yours, of course it is. brian--I'm glad you liked my scene...thank you for telling me. That's my deer--always so sweet and full of smiles. Bonnie--I'll keep painting if you keep on saying such nice things. Butterflies--I should have danced, should't I. Marge--I know, I know how you feel about it. Hi Victoria--thanks for your sweet words. Heather--Moon Magic would be a good title for a poem that you write. Janet--So glad to see you sweety...I have sure missed you!! Mark--Next time the moon! Tom--A wonderful thing to say...thank you...I must look for your poetry too. Sudhir--Thanks, my friend for the stunning...love that word! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Martie, this is so soft and lovely! Just wonderful! Great title too! Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Denise--thank you so much for finding this...it was missing your reading. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Martie simply enchanting. I was totally swept away in the beauty of this. Thanks so much for sharing it. Juls |
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