Of Being a Warrior in Time-Part One

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #9

Of Being a Warrior in Time-Part One

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-09-14 02:32 PM

Adulation

The perils of music lay loose
from bindings given and made
A creature of fair content
does slowly come this day
Of shocking wisdoms at control
through the shadows of his heart
Creating his own vast future
to which the days do fall apart
His time is in evening rymes
and rythms disrepair
Through mystic folly irony
that travels through the air
A pentant for the darker side
of earthly bounded escapes
Those with starlit eyes
and golden skin to take
As evening falls upon this land
beware of where you lay
For fair creature comes this way
upon the tide of destiny
His name is mere mystique
thouh you could scream when you see
Of torrid pleasures of the mind
that shred you pessimism today.

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

1 posted 2000-09-14 10:39 PM

A very deep and powerful poem Michael. You know I love it when you write like this.

So actaully what do you wear as a warrior?? You know I love a man in uniform!! LOL

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

2 posted 2000-09-15 02:06 PM

BTT!!!

For those who didn't see this first time around........

Marina

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2000-09-15 02:29 PM

lovely..and nicely written too..

shadow of poetry
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 76
midwest usa

4 posted 2000-09-15 07:43 PM

well i cant have part two in my file and not have part one *wink wink*
awesome...you are
LOL at Marina and the uniform...
bad poet..bad..

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

5 posted 2000-09-16 12:41 PM

Excuse me .......Miss Shadows of Poetry, who ever you are...

But, I am really liking the uniform thing. Thank you very much!!!!! LOL

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.