Open Poetry #9 |
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Disturbed Love |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
I found my true love She goes by one name It is April How it drives me insane I tell her she’s beautiful My love is for her But the situation is pitiful I am very disturbed My love is forbidden For she is married My hate is not hidden I wish he were buried Of her he abuses Both body and mind He leaves her in bruises And won’t let her shine His love fills her To the point that she’s hollow Of his love, Why does she swallow? She lives in a world Of shattered dreams No more does she see beauty Nothing is, as it seems She needs to get away Even if it’s not to me But for her own sake She needs to be free She says she still loves him They were joined by their fates But she can’t love him For it’s he she most hates April O April Please hear me plead April O April His love you don’t need! April O April I feel your pain April O April Stop playing his game! April O April Why do you stay? April O April Hurry! Get away! April O April You need to be freed April O April Of my love, you can feed! AOA AOA AOAAO AAOAA OAAOAAOAAO AAOAAOAA OAAOAA OAAO A Love is the law, love under will. |
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Nicki Junior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 14 |
This was a very interesting poem. It must suck to be in your situation, I offer you support. Dont loose your sanity over this girl. I know its hard, but I've been where your at ~~ forbidden love~~ and it sucks when things dont go your way. You have to give it all a chance to work out the way its destined to be. Well written piece though ![]() ~~Nicki~~ |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Thanks Nicki, It really does suck, but more for her than me. She spends too much time in the emergency room. |
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