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Nicki
Junior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 14


0 posted 2000-09-14 03:56 PM


When days get hard and nights seam longer
sitting alone in a puddle of thoughts for some time
struggling to fix all my problems and make myself stronger
strength comes from within and sometimes its hard to find

Take it one step at a time, one inch each day
believe in your power of self, heart, soul and mind
no problem is too big, never let it overcome your stay
Life is a joy, each moment special and every relationship devine

Every breath of fresh air clenses your spirit
lessons of the past fall into your hands
a dream is not just a dream, you can do it
take a chance, leap for love you will surely land

I give you my wisdom as I learn it today
never loose yourself, never loose control
it will all work out in its destined to be way
never fear, face your problems, love life and have a ball

© Copyright 2000 Nicki - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2000-09-14 04:17 PM


Wow! Nicki this is excellent. It mirrors my own philosophy.Thank you for posting it.

Be well
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

jlocke
Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169
CC,TX
2 posted 2000-09-14 04:25 PM


Beautiful just beautiful!
nando
Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87
Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden
3 posted 2000-09-14 04:30 PM


Nicki...

Great poem with a lot of wisdom in it. The very meaning of it all is passing the knowledge on to loved ones and being there with a positive look in things...

Keep posting nicki, you`re doin great

-nando-


Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday...

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