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Denali Silverwolf
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 11


0 posted 2000-07-31 12:26 PM


Ack! I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to pst "Death By Inches" twice. Beginner's error...

They say eyes are windows of the soul,
And I do not beg to differ,
From a child's eyes alone great
Mysteries can be told.
Where harrowed eyes reveal a deluge of woe,
That wrack and lacerate, in a spate of pain,
It's owners soul for ever more.
Silent whispers run through an enraptured psyche;
Impulses through a be-spelled mentality,
Bruised only by its purity.
Seven deadly sins, it has never known.
The devil and his nefarious minions,
Have never had a home.
A face masked with gentility,
Hides a macabre war begun with innocence,
Remembered throughout antiquity.
The torment of a tortured soul,
More anguish than was ever known.
In a heart where love and faith once resided alone.

~*Denali Silverwolf*~

© Copyright 2000 B. A. Reilly - All Rights Reserved
linda munday
Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315
Adelaide, Australia
1 posted 2000-07-31 12:33 PM


Well, well, well,
I just saw 'death by inches' and loved it, and now this one.  It is marvellous too.
Like I said, you have a flair for it.
Keep us up with the latest you write...pretty please  

Linda M.

jlocke
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since 2000-09-10
Posts 169
CC,TX
2 posted 2000-09-14 03:32 PM



Wow! All too true!

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
3 posted 2000-09-14 03:35 PM


Hey Denali - lookee here - I posted twice, too - ack!

[This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 09-14-2000).]

LngJhnAg
Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
4 posted 2000-09-14 03:35 PM


Hey Denali - deep writing here.  I had to slow down to really get the heat of it.  Im glad I did.  Are you, like Sunny1, an Alaskan?
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