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Words For You"/"Words Of My Reply".... by Bill and Sunny
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Words For You"/"Words Of My Reply".... by Bill and Sunny |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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“WORDS FOR YOU” AND “WORDS OF MY REPLY ” by Sunny1 and Bill Charles CLOSE YOUR EYES... “CLOSED, ARE MINE EYES..” FEEL MY LIPS... “TENDER, AS THEY TOUCH..” FEEL THE TOUCH OF FINGERTIPS... “SOFT, AS YOU’VE NEVER FELT..” I AM HERE... “TONIGHT, I AM WITH YOU..” YOU ARE THERE... “HERE, I AM NOT..” GYPSY MAGIC IN THE AIR... “MAKING MAGIC AT LAST..” THERE WILL BE... “A WARLOCK AND A GYPSY..” FOR TODAY... “WITH DAYS NEVER ENDING..” GENTLE KISSES SENT YOUR WAY... “WARM KISSES TASTED FROM AFAR..” SO CLOSE YOUR EYES... “CLOSED, ARE MINE EYES..” YOUR PARTNER IN RHYME...Sunny YOUR PARTNER IN PROSE...Bill [We're glad you stopped by!] Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 09-14-2000).] |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
And what wonderful partners in rhyme the two of you make  Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Michael... We thank you for coming by to read this!! It was fun to write with another poet, and we're glad you liked it! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Sunny1 N Bill C.... This one just tickles me PINK =) The charming way you two rhymed this verse.... A splendid display of talent you 2... ThankU for a delightful read b4 I hit the hay and catchup on some z's... Smiles2U Goodnite Coco |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW!!! Sunny and Bill you make for a perfect poetic couple (applause)...well done to you both, this is a most enjoyable read Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny and Bill, another spectacular duet. Very enjoyable. Love that gypsy magic..Needing some today. Sandra |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Coco..... It's good to see you here, and I didn't get to wish you a good night, so I will just say Good Morning and I hope you have a great day!!  < !signature-->Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 09-14-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Tracie.... Thank you so much, and we enjoy writing together......Bill is a wonder, with his romantic touch!!!  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very nice Sunny1...really like the "duet" in this. Enjoyed the read. jwesley |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi cat..... I'm sending some magic your way immediately.....it's coming through the air, headed for your mind....just relax and let it take over! Thank you, my friend....  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi jwesley.... Why, we both thank you, and glad you liked our 'duet'!! Bill is great to work with, and an inspiration..... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Just wonderful you two.....what a complete duet you guys make. Wonderful from beginning to end. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Mark.... Thank you, my friend...from both Bill and I! I grew up singing harmony, so doing duets with Bill is fun....let's me do a verbal harmony to match his beautiful work! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunny, This is absolutely just beautiful seeing it posted. What a wonderful job you did with formatting. You're a joy to work with, and the next one will be....... Thanks so much Sunny, you're a talent beyond compare! Bill |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Howdy Pardner!! I'm glad you liked the formatting....it's always fun to learn something new!! As far as talent, kind sir, I think you are the best. You're a joy to work with, and I'm looking forward to many more!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sunny and Bill...isnt it just the best fun finding a partner to dance with? I love this one and please keep singing to me. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula... Yes....and finding a dancing partner that dances so well is an even greater treasure!! Good to see you here!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Sunny & Bill Great job melding the feelings and words. Now, too bad you live so far apart - Bill plays a mean guitar and sings great too. A pair with many talents! didi |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
didi.... Thank you. Your message came in very clear, but distance is not always a negative factor, and sometimes it even adds to a partnership! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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