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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2000-09-13 10:00 PM

She holds the mysteries of her life,
    some trapped like a river,
    that holds her soul of untouched dreams

    Untouched in the roots of the air  that flow
    the earth, lit with fire, unbearable sometimes
    unforgiving, taunting her mind

    The stars of last night,
    the winds of last night
    woke her in early morning

    in early morning

    Her words were faint,
    she mumbles to memories
    long ago memories,

    The last time you said
    the world spun, I put my hands out
    to try and capture,

    to try and capture the

    impossible

    something inside
    something tells me

    sometimes

    time passes, to
    time standing still, and

    still standing

    wonders what holds
    her life together
    what holds her together

    what is together?
    does it mean life?

    what means life?

    wonders why the
    winds can change construction,
    why do they always change?, always construct?
    sometimes, all the time, maybe just

    (like)

    different trees, different limbs,
    different roots, different branches,

    reaching out, reaching above

    her head, she breaths in the shadows,
    breaths in the mysteries, breaths in her mind,
    lets it run beneath, lets it run through,
    lets it run over

    her soul like water,
    in unfinished thought

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2000-09-13 10:06 PM

this, I like...thank you!

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

2 posted 2000-09-14 08:40 AM

WOW....I am glad that I got to catch up with this one. Very nice formatting and the flow was superb. Show us some more please.

Effigy
Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 486
disbelief

3 posted 2000-09-14 09:44 AM

Grrrrreat!! I really enjoyed this one. Well written.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2000-09-14 07:51 PM

Sunshine  I really appreciate you taking time to read my words.....*S*

Mark   The replies you give, make writing worth while, thank you...*S*

Effigy  I am so glad you enjoyed....thank you
for reading...*S*

Greeneyes~



Your aroma still lingers
when I stand there,
still on soft ground,
still lingers as the ocean mist
spreads you over me
I find peace ~LC~ 99

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2004-10-09 11:18 AM

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