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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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A fire burns as lovers sleep during spring rain beneath the earth In the seas of night songs voice through silence, in strides along the edges of darkness that speak softly My lips dry your tears, as they speak your soft words, to a heart that walks through you when you are alone Bare your thirst, drink of the waters in passion weeping your shadows in arms of tired eyes ready to shut Of a heart you sleep in constant dreams deeper to a journey yet taken Beside you I lay , in tributes of the present, hanging your portrait stretched upon the earth as my canvas (as) I wear your m a s k of life, Together Close We sleep |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Greeneyes, What tenderness spoken here...a comfort, a release, an almost intoxicating calm. I enjoyed this so much. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
your words are - as they always have been - so meaningful, tender and loving, I'm always moved. find your peace - you will ~S~ |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
this was beautiful....  ~Heather |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Thank you all, for the kindness your words show.....*S* Greeneyes~ Your aroma still lingers when I stand there, still on soft ground, still lingers as the ocean mist spreads you over me I find peace ~LC~ 99 |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How beautiful, especially the last stanza. Just perfect. catalinamoon |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Quite, quite lovely and serene. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Superb. . . a quiet picture of a gentle love. . . Excellent. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge~ serene I love that word, thank you for responding so kindly.... Sven~ gentle love is sometimes hard to find, I am glad you enjoyed this.... thank you GE~ Your aroma still lingers when I stand there, still on soft ground, still lingers as the ocean mist spreads you over me I find peace ~LC~ 99 |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wonderful words tender thoughts The softest thing in the world Will overcome the hardest.Non-being can enter where there is no space". Taoist saying |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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