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Mike
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0 posted 2000-09-13 06:19 PM



T'was late July,
and Santa Claus,
felt time was ripe,
from work to pause.

He'd take a rest,
put up his feet,
'cause he was tired,
St. Nick was beat.

He summoned elves,
and reindeer too,
Said listen close,
Here's what we'll do.

The next two weeks,
We'll all take off,
This hot red suit,
I'm gonna doff.

With Mrs. Claus,
my north pole sweetie,
I'll take a cruise,
sail to Tahiti.

So for two weeks,
you're on vacation,
Elves and reindeer,
jumped in elation.

What will we do?
Where will we go?
Will be some place,
that has no snow!

Elves and reindeer,
thought and thought,
then in a flurry,
their tickets bought.

Some went to Rome,
Some to Bahama,
Rudolph left,
to see his mama.

The last to leave,
Wee elf so small,
now what would be,
his port of call?

Wee elf he flew,
to Hollywood,
to see a star,
or two he would.

Well, two weeks passed,
vacation's done,
elves and reindeer,
they all had fun.

But now was time,
to get to work,
vacation's over,
let elves not shirk.

But then a cry,
Where is wee elf?
yelled Santa Claus,
beside himself.

Where can elf be?
Small elf so wee,
perhaps he's hiding?
Please look and see.

But then a knock.
on toy shop's door,
a telegram,
t'was Santa for.

Dear Santa Claus,
commenced the wire,
From your employ,
I now retire.

I found new work,
in Hollywood,
in the movies,
I knew I could.

The wire ended,
Here's to your health,
Good luck Santa,
signed, Rambo Elf.



© Copyright 2000 Mike - All Rights Reserved
2dalimit
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1 posted 2000-09-13 06:29 PM


Hey, keep them comming. I enjoy the Wee Elf saga. I am keeping them all together for my grandchildren.
Thanks.
Melton

Jaysun C
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2 posted 2000-09-13 06:29 PM


good one, it's too way too hot to think about christmass, at least were I'm at
Martie
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3 posted 2000-09-13 06:39 PM


Great one Mike...I will look for him next time I am driving down Sunset Blvd...he might be standing on the wee corner.
Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2000-09-13 08:15 PM


I do enjoy these wee elf adventures Mike!  Such a wonderfully whimsical story, complimented by your perfect rhythmic flow ... really well done Mike!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Nan
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5 posted 2000-09-13 10:03 PM


Looking for the sequel..."Wee Elf does Hollywood"....   

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2000-09-13 10:35 PM


mike---I do so love wee elf.  ROFL...more please!!!
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7 posted 2000-09-13 10:42 PM


Mike~

Poor Wee Elf
all by himself,
in the portals of Hollywood sin
Why, I saw the little fellow
in a made-for-movie bordello ...
showing most of his skin !

*As RainbowGirl would say - OOPS !

Wonderfully done, my friend of fantastic fantasy.
~*Marge*~




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Mike
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8 posted 2000-09-14 08:41 AM


Thank ya all for the replies...
Martie...remind me to stay away from the wee corner if I come to California...er.. you mean small corner.. sorry...
Marge...not all things are wee in the elf world.. gawd..nope... no trips to Adult for wee elf.. he is G-rated...
glad you all enjoyed.

[This message has been edited by Mike (edited 09-14-2000).]

Meadowmuse
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9 posted 2000-09-14 09:17 AM


"Rudolph left,
to see his mama."

...still giggling over this delight!

I love what you do with Whimsy, my friend.  

~ Claire


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


serenity blaze
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10 posted 2005-12-12 05:12 PM


It's all coming back to me now...


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