Open Poetry #9 |
The Wee Elf Boogie |
Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
The wee'est elf, To all did say, It's Friday night, Come on, let's play. We've toiled all week, We've earned our keep, Let's have some fun, Before we sleep. We'll boogie hard; Shake our booties, Forget about, Our North Pole duties. I'll tell you what, We'll kareoke, Wee elf asked all, Okie Dokie? Rudolph yelled, Let's party down, 'Cause Santa Claus, Has went to town. The toy shop shook, As out came Prancer, To sing a song, With stall-mate Dancer. "I've Got You Babe." To the letter, Sonny and Cher, Could do no better. But then a hush, Fell on shop floor, As Santa Claus, Walked through the door. All elves and reindeer, Held their breath, With visions of, Impending death. Who's in charge, Of this fiasco? You've turned toy shop, Into a disco!!! Wee elf replied, It was me sir, Your wrath and ire, I will incur. Santa beckoned, Come here wee elf, And placed wee smirf, Upon top shelf. As wee elf quaked, In wee elf fear, Said Santa Claus, All listen hear. He then commenced, Gyrating hips, "Blue Suede Shoes," From forth his lips. Elves and reindeer, Dropped their jaws, As they all stared, At Santa Claus. The party roared, All through the night, It lasted til, The dawn's first light. When to wee bed, Wee elf then crept, With wee elf smile, Wee elf then slept. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 08-07-2000).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Mike...This is absolutely charming. Congradulations to you for writing such a fine work. I'm glad that I had the chance to stop by. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is adorable!!! and perfectly metered, might I add, lol...been studying y'know... (hopefully it'll show someday...grin) Thanks for the smiles... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Mike...Me thinks wee elf is soooo precious and I wanta disco too...with you! I just love this!!!! [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 08-07-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hi there,...do you by chance write children's stories??? If not,....ummm,...you should. This is soOo cool. Aah Truly. Thanks for the smile your words have put on my face. Be well M. *Peace. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Who knew that my friend Tim had such a wild side to him???....lmao. Thanks for the read and the smile. When you are old and grey and full of sleep, And nodding by the fire, take down this book, And slowly read, and dream of the soft look Your eyes had once, and of their shodows deep; How many loved your moments of glad grace, And loved your beauty with love false or true, But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you, And loved the sorrows of your changing face... William Butler Yeats |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sshhhhhhhhhhh....... The Wee Elf's asleep.... [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 08-07-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I know the wee folk will love this one, my friend. (and so do I!) ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Thank you all for the very gracious replies. At work, wee elf is expected now by the secretaries, who ask... what is wee elf doing... smile. Appreciate the comments. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Marvelous!!!! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mike, This is sooooooo cute! I'm very glad I stopped in! You made me life rosepetals |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mike, This is sooooooo cute! I'm very glad I stopped in! You made me smile rosepetals [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 08-08-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Cute, adorable, sweet, little elf boogie.... boogie on boogie on Elf Boogie (jailhouse rock melody) Santa threw a party in the ol toy shop The elf band was there and they began to rock The band was jumpin they began to swing You shoulda heard those pumped up elf cats sing. Let's rock everybody let's rock everybody in the ol toy shop was a dancin to the elf boogie rock. It's up to someone else to do the next verse..................... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Mike....Hi!! I love Christmas in July!!! This was great, and filled me with wee elf spirit.... Great writing here... fun and happy!! P.S. Nan does the neatest graphics!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
mike your the keebler man!!! i love the saga!! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
how good of a girl do i have to be to get wee elf under my tree? |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This should certainly be among the Christmas classics Now off to boogie... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
wee elf does karoake...sheesh I've seen this yanno... |
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