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It's Just A Moon Thang !
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It's Just A Moon Thang ! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Oh, look it's just that moon thang That orb of glowing light so hung up on itself Shining in the night You'd think that some magic had happened But that big sky just has a peep hole Other worlds watching us and wondering why we look with mouth agape Think on that ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
What a wonderful orb poem you have painted here. Had to run to the window and take a peek!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--You have made me smile a moon smile...thank you! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ One of the most beautiful sights to behold.....the full moon in all his glory. You have captured it wonderfully my friend. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I'm indeed thinking on that my friend...beautiful words and a beautiful format to match..I just might have to go take a peek at the moon myself! *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ So glad to catch you in the light of that glorious moon with Martie~ I love it cause I know you see the same beauty in it that I do LoneWolf~ Well so glad to see you like it too ! Krista~ Peek-A-Boo Just remember, someone may just be looking back at you and me and all of us moon worshipers out here ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marge-so what you are tellin me is that all those nights with me SWEETNESS under the moonlite we were being watched .....peeked at.....they saw everything? cheeeeeezzzz...no wonder it seemed to wink at us...LOL Loved it Marge. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cowboy~ Who cares if they were watching Gave 'em something to write home about Shhh ! I'll never, ever tell .. Shh! *Hugs* ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Something to think on indeed. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
how clever, Marge ... and a beautiful verse to boot ... well done |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oooohhhh margie just mooned us and it was SO lovely  very cool- I do so enjoy seeing poets play with their poetry lol later-(wo)man-in-the-moon-gator jm |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hello there Miss Marge! I'm glowing this morning after reading your poem...thank you for allowing me to start my day bright. (and whole).  . You, and these totally captivating and artistically painted works are just the best! Take care MT. *Peace. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Hehehe....very creative harvest moon. Just wish them there blasted Moonies would stop mooning me! Where that buckshot at? Alicat, the Persnikitty |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Clever very clever...and who knows...if they can see us...doesnt that mean we can see them? peep |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Marge, Another wonderfully beautiful Moon from you... you are a full moon person... full of hopes and full of exuberance and life.. I wish for you to remain that the entire lifetime and more... regards, sudhir. P.S. one of these days I am going to be writing about the phases of moon and dedicate it to you.... I sincerely hope to make this come true... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, EagleOne~ Just you keep on thinking with MAMiller~ and JanetMarie~ how clever the moon does beam with SpitFire~ glowing so bright and AliCat~ waiting to be 'mooned' Such friends of my making and chances I'm taking to watch this glow in the night Paula~ seems to be lost in the dreams of just who's looking back Sudhir~ I wait ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Delaney says so !  ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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