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suthern
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0 posted 2000-09-11 08:13 PM


Mystical dragons wander from their lair
Wisps of white smoke linger in the air
Another world of ancient land as far as I see
The land of enchantment envelopes me.

Demure maidens meet charming lovers
Witches reign under night's dark cover
Another world of fairy land as far as I see
The land of enchantment envelopes me.

Clowns and elephants and merry-go-rounds
The crunching of sawdust all over the ground
Another world of circus land as far as I see
The land of enchantment envelopes me.

Kites and balloons float in the air
Cake and ice cream, excitement everywhere
Another world of party land as far as I see
The land of enchantment envelopes me.

Rainy day drags on with no end in sight
A little girl's imagination takes flight
Another world of innocence as far as I see
The land of enchantment envelopes me.


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Martie
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1 posted 2000-09-11 08:51 PM


Suthern--so sweet is the land of enchantment...I wish I still knew where it was.  Love this poem!
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2 posted 2000-09-11 10:07 PM


lovely images and wonderful poem..  
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3 posted 2000-09-11 10:45 PM


OK, suthern girl! An uplifting, enchanting poem....at last!!!! You musta heard from the Evil One! I love this side of ya
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4 posted 2000-09-12 07:03 AM


Martie: I don't know if I'll ever get to visit again... it seems like forever since 3/6/00 and some potholes seem to have developed in the path, though I remember it well. *S* Thank you for liking this one...

Victoria: Thank you very much! *S*

Deer One: I'm glad you liked it... but this is an old one... I guess I needed the whimsy to brighten the evening. *S* No word from the Fine One... if he sails through, tell him this suthern gal misses him. *G*

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5 posted 2000-09-12 07:12 AM


Suthern~

Well, you sure have cast a spell of enchantment upon this fine morning.

Delightfully done.
Hugs to you, friend.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nan
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6 posted 2000-09-12 07:18 AM


Daydreams can take you just about anywhere, can't they?... I like this one, suthern..
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7 posted 2000-09-12 08:33 AM


Hi..this is a really cool poem. You have a great talent  
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8 posted 2000-09-12 08:50 AM


Suthern~ this is so pretty.....it brings wonderful images to mind..... -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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9 posted 2000-09-12 08:54 AM




I can't seem to find it on my map anywhere........ WHERE THE HECK IS IT...I WANNA GO Beautiful tale of wonderment and mystical imagination.  Loved it.

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10 posted 2000-09-12 09:05 AM


Dizzy thoughts spinning around in your head,
Wishing for Toerag and not me instead.
Another world of blonde thinking as far as I see,
The land of enchantment envelopes me.

Great poem, lil Belle - I know you well, Ruthie - and I know you are going to be OK as you plant your roots deeper and everybody around you comes to love you more and more.

suthern
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11 posted 2000-09-12 07:05 PM


Marge, Nan, Ann, SEA, Mark, & LJA: Thank you all very much! I'd rather expected this one to (deservedly *S*) sink like a stone... Your kind comments are a very pleasant surprise!

And sailor: Thanks for the smiles and vote of confidence... SMOOCH!

Um... er... uh... that WAS just a friendly smooch of thanks, Lor. LOL

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