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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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Mystical dragons wander from their lair Wisps of white smoke linger in the air Another world of ancient land as far as I see The land of enchantment envelopes me. Demure maidens meet charming lovers Witches reign under night's dark cover Another world of fairy land as far as I see The land of enchantment envelopes me. Clowns and elephants and merry-go-rounds The crunching of sawdust all over the ground Another world of circus land as far as I see The land of enchantment envelopes me. Kites and balloons float in the air Cake and ice cream, excitement everywhere Another world of party land as far as I see The land of enchantment envelopes me. Rainy day drags on with no end in sight A little girl's imagination takes flight Another world of innocence as far as I see The land of enchantment envelopes me. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Suthern--so sweet is the land of enchantment...I wish I still knew where it was. Love this poem! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely images and wonderful poem..  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
OK, suthern girl! An uplifting, enchanting poem....at last!!!! You musta heard from the Evil One!  I love this side of ya |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Martie: I don't know if I'll ever get to visit again... it seems like forever since 3/6/00 and some potholes seem to have developed in the path, though I remember it well. *S* Thank you for liking this one... Victoria: Thank you very much! *S* Deer One: I'm glad you liked it... but this is an old one... I guess I needed the whimsy to brighten the evening. *S* No word from the Fine One... if he sails through, tell him this suthern gal misses him. *G* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Suthern~  Well, you sure have cast a spell of enchantment upon this fine morning. Delightfully done. Hugs to you, friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Daydreams can take you just about anywhere, can't they?... I like this one, suthern..  |
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Ann Member
since 2000-07-07
Posts 64Australia |
Hi..this is a really cool poem. You have a great talent |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Suthern~ this is so pretty.....it brings wonderful images to mind..... -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I can't seem to find it on my map anywhere........ WHERE THE HECK IS IT...I WANNA GO Beautiful tale of wonderment and mystical imagination. Loved it. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Dizzy thoughts spinning around in your head, Wishing for Toerag and not me instead. Another world of blonde thinking as far as I see, The land of enchantment envelopes me. Great poem, lil Belle - I know you well, Ruthie - and I know you are going to be OK as you plant your roots deeper and everybody around you comes to love you more and more. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Marge, Nan, Ann, SEA, Mark, & LJA: Thank you all very much! I'd rather expected this one to (deservedly *S*) sink like a stone... Your kind comments are a very pleasant surprise! And sailor: Thanks for the smiles and vote of confidence... SMOOCH! Um... er... uh... that WAS just a friendly smooch of thanks, Lor. LOL |
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