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I and You
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I and You |
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eyesplus2 Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163australia |
Sing for me........ I sing for you....... Laugh for me........ I laugh with you....... Dream for me........ I dream with you...... Wish for me.... I wish for us....... I and you...... Love we do........ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
EP2~ short and sweet.....I like this very much!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I believe that you have just re-defined those three little words and changed them from "I love you" to "I love US"....beautiful sentiments in so few words. Lovely write. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I adore the simplicity of this...very tender |
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Nicki Junior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 14 |
I really liked this poem, it was so simple and sweet, really well written. You have captured the essence of love in a few lines. Well done |
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