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Parker
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0 posted 2000-09-11 05:21 PM



The Falcon and the Yoke   “The Clan Hay”

In truth and myth, but mostly truth
This, tale comes before ye.
A thousand years, in gilded gold
On shields told, the falcon and the yoke.
A Hay a Hay a Hay, Mac Garaidh.

The story tells, of a family’s name
A farmer and two sons I tell ye'.
Near Scotland’s Perth, Danish came
To sack and rape a’ fore them.
‘Tis not the end, it just began I tell ye.

In Kenneth's time, the third of Line,
When the Danish dared t’ take us.
An army then of Kenneth's men
To river Tay, on battle day I take thee.
A Hay A Hay A Hay, Serva Jugum (“Keep the Yoke”)

The rant and roar, of blade for blood and gore
In battle’s clash, rang fiercely.
An’ mortal men, for land and kin, died trembling
As day grew long, the Danish strong, now grinin
A Hay A Hay A Hay, a falcon’s fame now legend.

With loss of friend, Kenneth’s men ran cowrin
An’ victory grim, was Scotland’s glory now dimin’
But grabbing yoke, a Hay’ man’s voice was cleaving
He stopped the hoard, them cowards bor’ a breakin
A Hay A Hay A Hay, a Farmer’s Yoke waved Bravely.

A powerful man, of the Hay Clan, stood proudly,
Two son’s now charged to help then.
With heart and word, gave Kenneth’s men their courage
An’ back to fray, with the men of Hay, they clammered
A Hay, A Hay, A Hay, Serva Jugum Mac Garaidh

Renewed today, the clavers would wave, in glory
Like haggis an’ bread, the Danish lay dead as sack meat
An’ victory was lead, by Hay and his kin for Scotland
Then Kenneth did come, a gift of land won for honor.
A Hay, A Hay, A Hay, The Falcon and the Yoke.

A Falcon was freed, to land where it heed, fair winnins,
An’ acres of land, for the Hay and his clan, now givin
To this honor was wrote, In name written and spoke
With song by the smoke of the gatherins,
A Hay, A Hay, A Hay, the Falcon and the Yoke….

Mac Garaidh…. (Gaelic For Hay)




James Parker Haley Sep 11, 2000

(after some research into the background of name and family  
“The Clan Hay” and some research into old Scottish
poetry this is the best I could do to make it sound like
old Scottish. I apologize if it makes no sense to a real
Scot….. I must say that I love that old poetry.)






[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 09-11-2000).]

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Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 2000-09-11 06:19 PM


I am Irish but I too  love the old language and I have to admit that I will have to come back to this and re-read it as I have three times now and I just don't have the words to give it FULL justice.  I shall be back on this one...."count on it".....printing now to take with me and enjoy some more.
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2 posted 2000-09-11 06:56 PM


Can hear this being sang out round the rights of spring rings of fire, dear Park.
Lovely!  I won't judge the aunthenticity, I'm by no means qualified to do so, but it sings to me!

Corinne

Parker
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3 posted 2000-09-11 07:33 PM


Mark, it is the old language that has so much character that I love. Thanks for replying.

Corinne, thank you bonnie lass.  

Parker


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4 posted 2000-09-11 08:23 PM


the poet prince of swoon now becomes master of weave.
very cool poem parker  


my sister is the poet
I am but a shadow.
by the light of poetry
I read then dream

Marina
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5 posted 2000-09-11 08:40 PM


if you keep writing stuff like this, someone might start to call you poet!  

Your research has most defintely payed off.  I like the pic too.

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



Parker
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6 posted 2000-09-12 10:42 AM


Shadow, thank you, but tis a wee thing...  

Marina, thanks, pics are your thing I pre-assume...  


Parker

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7 posted 2000-09-12 10:46 AM


Parker~ this is perfect....I have a weak spot for the Irish accent.... -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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8 posted 2000-09-12 11:02 AM


Parker - A great read - You told it well.  I have just one other thought (heh heh).  Is it just a coincidence that you wrote of the Clan Hay - or was it because you are a Canadian, hey?  *heh heh - I couldn't resist*
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9 posted 2000-09-12 11:42 AM


SEA, thats just perfect because I have a weak spot for the Irish lasses.    

LngJhnAg, well to be perfectly correct... me matey.. its "eh!" not hey.
I'm going to have to educate you on proper Canadian lingo.  

Parker


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10 posted 2000-09-12 11:47 AM


I really enjoy *exploratory* poetry.
This was no exception Parker  
~Heather

PS I am of the Clan Baird

[This message has been edited by X Angel (edited 09-12-2000).]

Paula Finn
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11 posted 2000-09-12 01:07 PM


This just speaks to me...being of the MacPhereson clan myself...and I love how you put your standard at the top of your poem...how did you do that?
Parker
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12 posted 2000-09-12 05:21 PM


Heather of the Clan Baird, a wonderful Clan my dear... and the coolest crest. Their is a big group in eastern Canada...
Badge: A gryphon's head erased Proper
Mottos: Dominus fecit (The Lord has done this)
Arms: Gules, a boar passant Or
The Baird Coat of Arms reflects the Clan's mythical origins. It is said that a Baird once saved William the Lion from a wild boar and in thanks was given lands in Lanarkshire.
The Bairds spread to Banffshire in the North-east and then to Auchmeddan, Aberdeenshire. They became prominent in this area and provided a long line of Aberdeenshire sheriffs. The Bairds influence in the region was strengthened through marriage into the Keith family, the Earls Marischal of Scotland.

A member of the Auchmeddan Clan, John Baird, was created a Baronet and then appointed to the High Court by the title Newbyth, after his beautiful house in East Lothian.

I bow to you my Lady...  


Paula of the Clan MacPhereson, I looked but could not find anything on your Clan, is that the correct spelling...

Parker



LngJhnAg
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13 posted 2000-09-12 06:27 PM


Parker - How about the Clan MacScalawag?  I've always wanted to know about Balladeer - lol.
Parker
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14 posted 2000-09-14 02:20 PM


Long John, you sure your not talking about your crest.... the crossbones with the one legged parot swooping down on the unsuspecting Ballarina's...  


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15 posted 2000-09-14 02:58 PM


As promised I am back to read this and I find it so intriguing.  Well done Parker and your depth and research are shining brightly in this piece.
Parker
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16 posted 2000-09-14 05:15 PM


Mark, thank you good poet. I enjoy researching a topic and trying to write about it. I seem to be into everything Celtic these days..... ever since I was touched by the Irish...  

Parker

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17 posted 2000-09-14 05:45 PM


Parker what can I say, being part Irish this really touched me. Very well done my friend.
Juls

Parker
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18 posted 2000-09-15 01:49 PM


Juls, thank you, its an Irish thing my lassy.

Parker

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