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ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 806


0 posted 2000-09-11 01:35 PM


a thanks to love ...

a thanks to love
for without
call me ill
upon my will

my sails
never to flag
upon an open
wind

my deeds
never done good
upon a day's
end

my seeds
never to sow
upon a field's
row

my sights
never to set
upon your beauty's
glow

a thanks to love
for without
call me dead
upon my dread


M.A. Miller
09.11.00< !signature-->

My calling before me, let quill be my offering;
For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive.

M.A.




[This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 09-11-2000).]

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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2000-09-11 02:09 PM


MA, the choice of subject and the way of thought are very profound...

great work...

regards,
sudhir

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-09-11 08:16 PM


Like this one much, MA, altho Love is a tough taskmaster at times...what else is there?  Nice....
ma miller
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806

3 posted 2000-09-12 11:47 AM


thank you both for taking the time to read such a simple thought ...
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
4 posted 2000-09-12 01:35 PM


Mark...your thoughts are never simple. They say so much in so few words but that definitely doesnt make them simple..this is lovely

[This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 09-12-2000).]

CocoBaci
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

5 posted 2000-09-12 01:49 PM


hi MA...

This is a splendid poem...
Much is read into these thoughts you've expressed...

Thank you for the sharing
Coco

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