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Zyell
Member

since 2000-07-28

Posts 121
USA

0 posted 2000-09-10 10:30 PM

In A drive of blue asphalt,
beyond A finite dividing
white line,
is billowing waves,
clouds ascending, descending,
A mirage of Sea.
A delectable, the liquid, blood
widening veins, nourishing pure illusion,
the heart throbs, to a series of
beats on the far side of
one, two, and three.
Hands, with knuckles pale,
grip the wheel,
A foot slides smooth
The pedal greets,
creating speed.
Driving, driving, driving,
past bounded asphalt blue,
beyond white lines,
straight-away into
surging waves of clouds
rising, falling,
The Mirage of Sea.

"I am an abstract of Circles"

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2000-09-10 10:37 PM

Zyell,

Welcome to Passions!! This was a very interesting piece you have posted here. Makes you really think. I like it.

Looking forward to seeing more of your work.

Lone Wolf

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

2 posted 2000-09-10 10:39 PM

What a wonderful image filled poem. Excellent way to introduce yourself. Welcome to Passions and I look forward to more of your posts and replies.

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite

since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

3 posted 2000-09-10 11:25 PM

In so very few places - do I feel as at home as behind the wheel- letting the car take me away- letting the road offer the vistas of romance adventure and mystery - - you may or may not have intended any of this - but this I felt - and I thank you - Welcome

~Time is too slow for those who wait,
too swift for those who fear,
too long for those who grieve,
too short for those who rejoice,
but for those who love,
time is eternity.

~ Henry Van Dyke ~

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2000-09-11 06:36 AM

Zyell, Welcome to passions. You're gonna like it here and I can see if you continue to write like that you'll fit right in.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2000-09-11 02:57 PM

I have always enjoyed your writing.....this is an excellent piece.....*S*

Greeneyes

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

6 posted 2000-09-11 02:59 PM

a very poignant piece of writing to mark your entry to this place...

WELCOME TO PASSIONS

regards,
sudhir

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2000-09-11 03:30 PM

Talented writing Zyell. Loved it

Welcome to Passions.

Zyell
Member

since 2000-07-28

Posts 121
USA

8 posted 2000-09-11 07:03 PM

Lone wolf, Mark Bohannan, Wilfred Yeats, Kethry, Green Eyes, Sudhir, Victoria.....

thank you all very much,
I do appreciate it,
This seems like groovy
place to be.... ~grin~

Z

"I am an abstract of Circles"

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