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topnotch707
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 16
vallejo, cali, usa

0 posted 2000-08-02 06:16 PM


I was nothing at all until I had you
you bring joy to my heart
you turn my grey skies blue.
You're all the missing pieces
in my puzzle of life
you bring a smile to my face
every day and night.
You're all I ever dreamed of
you're all I'll ever need
you are the love of my life...
Yes, indeed.
I can't live without you
I just wouldn't be me
you changed my whole world
and set me free.
Your life is mine now
it's all in my hands
I'll teach you everything you'll need to know
to grow up and be a caring man.
But you're still my little boy
who can't yet understand.
But i'll guide you through
this hectic world...
Just hold on to Mommy's hand.
  -Rebecca Vieu (C)

This poem is dedicated to my son Robert Morgan III
which whom I love with all my heart and soul.



© Copyright 2000 Rebecca Vieu - All Rights Reserved
Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
1 posted 2000-08-02 07:01 PM


Your poem shows that there is no question of how very much you love your son.  Welcome to Passions!
Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
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2 posted 2000-08-02 08:29 PM


Well .... this little piece of your heart,
sure makes you TopNotch with me !

Welcome to Passions.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
3 posted 2000-08-03 01:45 PM


you inspire me, i will soon have to write a tribute to my little boy. you are a loving mom through and through...those words speak loudly and clearly...ringing with Love!!
Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
4 posted 2000-08-03 03:20 PM


Wow,
so touching and heartfelt....

TopNotch / rebecca, this is a wonderful tribute...

regards,
sudhir



passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2004-05-02 08:01 PM


so sweet
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