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Tearing Wind-Writen with Janet Marie
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Tearing Wind-Writen with Janet Marie |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Could not the wind be wrong, to take me on this road. A journey I did want, one that would bring me home. All my life I have searched for this, wished on stars and fountains of blue. I've been lost and then found again ... on this hearts journey ... all my roads lead back to you. My soul traveled through the air, upon winds time of change. Landing me to your door, where I collapsed into your arms again. You were always my safe harbor, my sanctuary, my saving grace. Your love was my quiet comfort ... your words ... my poetic embrace. And those moments that you gave to me, where time knew nothing of its pace. I lost my soul inside of you, to which you keep its spirit safe. In your eyes reflection, I fell in to the depths of your intensity. There I discovered my own depths, and tempted both fate and destiny. Yet fate took hold, as destiny did follow, our hearts grew together as one. And the winds new nothing of the coming sorrow, for we understood the decision done. In the quiet calm before the deluge, hearts heard the whispers of another's call. Love was swept away by the winds of change, leaving all lost in the distance of the fall. And fall I have into your heart, the one that's loves and takes control. On days from now I will wonder fast, of all those may have beens we could have held. To love without regret was my only wish, and now I pray that you will someday understand. Though ties that bind hold me here ... from this day on, you hold my heart in your hand. And it is our hearts and souls as one, as I know I must let you go from my affection. The wind that whispers in my ear, shall always be our connection. And it will be that same wind ... should fate allow ... that will carry you back to my heart to stay. Until that destined moment ... please know ... not even Heaven's tears ... could wash this love away. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
.....WOW..... Thats the only expression I have for now... ... will come back later for re-reading this many times over... regards, sudhir |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i was going to quote some lines...but found that i was just about to quote most of the poem.........this story i too share...and i truly feel its loving and longing...you both did a wonderful job! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh gosh...you guys did a great job with this...so full of the sound of breaking heart but also the everlastingness of love. Well done! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is fantastic writing you two!!! A perfect combination of insight, soul searching and forgiveness. Love always find us whether we exspect it or not. Great work!!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
OH MY!!!! Huge **AW hugs** this is so perfect! Your styles compliment eachother...like a dance of moon and stars. You've given my heart wings today.... And it will be that same wind ... should fate allow ... that will carry you back to my heart to stay. Until that destined moment ... please know ... not even Heaven's tears ... could wash this love away. J.M. You KNOW this part has my heart!!! Michael...you don't know it but you KNOW it  Bravo!!!! Encore....please! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
An excellent piece. GReat team work from two amazing poets. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is great!!! and I know YOU know I can relate JM---hope to see more from you two! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
SUPERB you two........I was so happy to have found my way to this one. The effort the two of you put in on this turned out an outstanding creation of love.  |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
thankyou for the kind replies all of you! I really loved working on this...... thank you JM............ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow, and another Wow! You've penned beautiful music together Michael and Janet Marie! Such longing, such desire toward a love everlasting ... a wonderful collaboration!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Thank you all for such glowing replies... and thank you Michael for inviting me to write with you... your gifted verses inspired me and made my moody muse work hard to match them... thank you for the inspiration... I look forward to our next poetic endeavor. take care all JM There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
This piece rocks. The dynamic dual. A wonderful combination of two poets. A beautiful emotional piece you two have created... bravo. Parker |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 enjoyed |
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