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Floren
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since 2000-09-08
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0 posted 2000-09-09 06:12 AM




I made an acrostih:

Lay Down...

Lay down close to me, sweet creature of the night
And play with my hair the way you like it so much
Caressing my soar naked body that's getting to tight
Instantly making me the happiest man when I feel your touch
Forever in love with you... loving me back at my sight...

Love, one name that  makes me to beg for forgiveness and light
Or maybe... one name that sounds like a "JOE" whispering song
Remember how good is to love and forgive all my struggle and fight
End all the hate... I admit it to you that my mind was so wrong
Never forget that I love you... and try to get back at my sight..


Please post your comments...



[This message has been edited by Floren (edited 09-09-2000).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-09-09 02:59 PM


Sounds like love to me!  

Denise

Floren
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since 2000-09-08
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2 posted 2000-09-10 02:34 AM


you are soo true dsnyder...
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