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Lay Down...
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Lay Down... |
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Floren Junior Member
since 2000-09-08
Posts 37 |
 I made an acrostih: Lay Down... Lay down close to me, sweet creature of the night And play with my hair the way you like it so much Caressing my soar naked body that's getting to tight Instantly making me the happiest man when I feel your touch Forever in love with you... loving me back at my sight... Love, one name that makes me to beg for forgiveness and light Or maybe... one name that sounds like a "JOE" whispering song Remember how good is to love and forgive all my struggle and fight End all the hate... I admit it to you that my mind was so wrong Never forget that I love you... and try to get back at my sight.. Please post your comments... [This message has been edited by Floren (edited 09-09-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sounds like love to me!  Denise |
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Floren Junior Member
since 2000-09-08
Posts 37 |
you are soo true dsnyder... |
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