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Two hearts, One Song - For Lorelei
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Two hearts, One Song - For Lorelei |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion 
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You hunger for my stroking hand, Arch higher as you cannot stand The sweet caresses, all unplanned As I hold you there in my command. In joy I stroke and caress, You rise higher as I bless Your sweetest center, your nexus, As I draw you in and watch you crest. Your sweet voice in soprano rings, As my knowing strokes, eliciting, The raging passions that you bring From deep within your sweetest being. We plunge ahead as we surrender, Loving all that our love renders. Kisses, strokes, fires sinter, Each capitulation softly tendered. The roaring of the flames grows higher, We drive each other into the fire, Our bodies one as we aspire, To give in not out to our desire. Swept up into passionate release, We use our love to give us peace. And, oh, the energies released, When our bodies meet in this heat. Your body aches to meet mine where, Crashing hard, our skin bare, We are suspended in scented air, As you shake hard and I spend there. The early eve sweeps into night, In raptured love we know is right We hold each other ever tight, As our souls meld in the bight. The night rolls in and takes us then, Carries us to dreams and yen. And, oh, that we not come back again, From the place where our love's been. The early morning finds us asleep, Me spooned with you in my arm's keep, As you murmur with your voice so sweet, "I love you, my Mike." I love you, my Susan. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nothing is as beautiful as two lovers sharing time together...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
WOW I didn't know you had that much < !signature-->"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 09-08-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So beautiful! |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
He's as perfect as any man can be And now I sure you all do see Why I Love this man with all my might And keep him marching in the right. All kidding aside...I count my blessings one by one that this man is mine and by my side. Mike, your words grow more precious with each line you write. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Awww Mike that is sooooooooooooooooooooo sweet! Lorelei what a treasure you have...all except that kitty kickin thing  LOL |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 Drool ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Uhmm oh my, actually since I have met ya'll this was wayyyyyyy too much information for me. BUT on the brighter side, OH MY GAWD!  ~one very jealous X Angel signing off |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
MIKE! Absolutely HOT!!! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
***gasp*** Did I sign on in the wrong forum....I was looking for the ole kitty kicker. Must be the wrong room...'scuse my interruption.....BTW...very sweet..may I borrow this one and just change the names?  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'd ask if I could borrow on the e'en of the morrow but then I would be mortified as Lorelie she be by my side and say "you knew him WHEN?" and I would say "when he was kitty-kickin..." LJA...do it well...and always with the most wonderful woman by your side...Lorelie...you one lucky female, YOU! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is wonderful!! It's so great that Lorelei can let my name slip out in a moment of passion and have it go unnoticed..hehe. Keep thinking she means you, LongJohn, it's more fun that way  Now, as far as the poem is concerned.....it is TERRIFIC!!! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Simply beautiful - worn out word - but no less could express the exquisite tenderness - I found in this paean of love. |
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