Open Poetry #9 |
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Linger |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Linger here in my thoughts Let me show you what it cost If you gave me a million dollars It would be on a token of my broken heart. Linger here and you will feel my arteries begin to harden and turn black for lack of showing any feeling. Stay awhile be assured your only catching a glimpse of the obscure perks of this trip for which you only have taken but a sip. Linger a minute and you will see for my hearts scattered, more than torn into There's just no more ways that you can save a battered heart. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
NURSE!!! Get the Glue!!!Quick! ![]() ok.....not funny, sorry. This is tragic...I hope you are ok~ HUGS for you ![]() Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Sea thanks I do need some glue and make it super glue nurse hurry! I may seem dramatic at times and I am! lol hey thanks for that glue really hardens those vessels, shew I can hardly walk but at least I'm not coming apart. ( sense of humour is the key) to something oh yeah laughter.. hehe |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Linger indeed, at times (alot lately) I feel like that fancy crackle glass stuff....could shatter any second, so easily. good'un ~H |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
xangel, sometimes I linger to often I'm afraid, maybe I should step aside and let someone else step on some glass lol no I would never ever do that, It hurts to much. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This was heart touching work...I know my heart felt it...every tear. You dove deep for this piece...now swim up for air. Great work~ |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thank you so much butterflies don't cry, I really do try to swim thanks for the nudge. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Keep love in your heart. A life without it is like a sunless garden when the flowers are dead. The consciousness of loving and being loved brings a warmth and richness to life that nothing else can bring. ~ Oscar Wilde ~ Good advice I think for when you feel torn apart - great poem |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thanks wilfred, And I appreciate your words, which help ease the pain. Sometimes we all have a little rain and othertimes lightning seems to knock us down. |
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