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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-09-08 07:28 AM




It's In Your Kiss

When thoughts begin to rise
a kiss, I feel, gentle and warm
touching my mind with you.

Waves of happiness
ripple throughout, leaving
imprints, here and there, along my edges.

In my dreams, out of the darkness
comes a shadow
to touch me in whisper kisses.

My body, blanketed in them,
keeps them close in my hold
to last 'til the morn appears.

Pillowed softly against me
are the memories of each and every touch,
every kiss ever taken or given.

As the darkness fades
I find the arms of loving, lips of kiss,
caressing, comforting me as the dawn returns.

You draw my breaths to yours,
each night binding me to you,
each morning overflowing with passon...

As you dominate my every thought.

M
9*2k







[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 09-08-2000).]

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Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-09-08 07:31 AM


Very sweet memories for you and presented so well in your wonderful style.
MMoonchild
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2 posted 2000-09-08 07:39 AM


thank you Mark..thought I would try to be more upbeat to start my day...

~~soft smiles
Maureen

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
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3 posted 2000-09-08 07:43 AM


this verse you've written says much about longing and the need and desire to be loved. thank you for sharing this.

i know this may not be the proper forum for this, so i apologize in advance. i was just wondering, since i've read much of your work, how you find inspiration this type of "loving" topic and also, at the same time, write about topics the exact opposite full of pain regarding crumbling relationships.

i can't seem to write, during any given time period, with such a wide range of emotion. my writing follows patterns... during times of love, i write about it, during times of pain and hurt, i write about that. thanks for filling me in! i am asking only because, i think that perhaps your answer could help me learn to write myself out of pain and anger and distress. Thank you.  

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
4 posted 2000-09-08 07:49 AM


Tender and softly flowing M, this is
beautiful...a wonderful way to wake up...with
eyelids kissed by the angels.  Take care~

poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
5 posted 2000-09-08 08:29 AM


"as you dominate my every thought"

oh sweet Maureen, what a lovely loving poem this is!!!
~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13
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6 posted 2000-09-08 08:14 PM


doreen, thank you..   I sent you my response in an email..but I want to thank you for your caring words, again
~~soft smiles
Maureen

Eyelids kissed by the angels... what a beautiful thought
thank you
{{hugs}}to the butterfly

Dawn, always  a sweet word from you
special {{hugs}}
Maureen

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