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Laughter's Wings
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Laughter's Wings |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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~LAUGHTER'S WINGS~ Soft voices in the distance whisper "let souls be as one"..."let hearts unite," and for one magical night, we are together as it was meant to be, our love gathers the winds as emotions fly us through the air on magic carpets woven with laughter, joy and care, we leave behind pain, loneliness and confusion as the world around us disapears for a moment's time We caress under the moonlight whils't stars burn with intensity shining in your eyes as you look deep into mine - their sparkling reflections of pure love lasting touches the depths of all that I am experiencing the wonder of the wind's breath of freedom We fly past crashing waves of crystal blue entranced by it's thunderous applause for the eternal love found within me and you, your laughter echoes through time and space returning to sing lullabies in my ears, your breath upon my face sends my spirit into reveries, your lips touch mine - seduced by the sweet taste of your kiss, there, we soar intoxicated within the dance of passion's bliss, the wind blows through my hair as your fingers gently graze my skin sending rushes and chills through my soul, oh enraptured am I of you captivated by a knight forever true, we fly through night and into the morn, as our love carries us away to the very ends of the day to watch the beauty of the sunset's colours make love amidst the horizon as we glide on laughter's wings *By Melissa Honeybee* < !signature--> The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 09-07-2000).] |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
This is beautiful.....truely describes how it feels to be in love......gliding on laughters wings was a very nice way to put it!! Great job!!  Julie :) |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Melissa - This is very sweet - You've written this wonderfully. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Very Beautiful and sensual........drifting away......really captivating Mel. Jon |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Love wrapped in sensuality. Very beautiful in imagery and content. Loved the flow and the way it captures the reader. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you so much everyone for your kind replies. Usually I am very critical and hard on myself, but I am actually content with this poem  Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Melissa, This captivates the soul. The beauty seen in every word, every line. Just beautiful. Deb |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ You've just done a wonderful job on this, my friend. I can fully understand your contentment with it. Nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, this just flows wonderfully. . . it's an excellent poem, and I can see why you're so content with it. . . Wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Melis, this is enchanting and very lovely the imagery is wonderful, beautiful but its the emotions that flow so gracefully and carry the reader... contentment ...you wear it well superb take care jm |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
"one magical moment".....ohhhhhhhhh no that would never never do...this is so very tender and sensual...beautiful work..an exquisite weave~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Melissa, I not surprised you are content with this one it has a lovely flow to it. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow, I didn't expect to receive this many replies, thank you every one! It means a lot to me to "impress" such great poets in here Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this is so great....very warm and loving...and the title is fantastic! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Enjoyed it, realy sweet feelings your describing, makes a change from the stuff that I manage to come up with, I much more enjoy reading positive poetry than depressing poetry . Thanks alot . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Melissa, This is a beautifully written work... regards, sudhir... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Poutprincess, angelswing and Sudhir thank you so much for your replies! I'm glad that you liked my poem Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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