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A Change in Plans
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A Change in Plans |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
I wanted to be there but the mailman left a package at my door it was a birthday present from my sister I would have been there but the phone rang just as I was leaving once, I told you that I loved you but I was really too young to know what love is I know I said we would always be together but it was the college I applied for on the phone and they wanted to schedule an interview I meant it when I said that you mean so much to me but I forgot how much I meant to myself I wanted to be there but next week I’ll be nineteen. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Debbie - You didn't change your plans. You simply used your woman's prerogative to change your mind. A worthy explanation. |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Well, I didn't change my mind, but I guess the character in my poem did! (Wish I was going to be nineteen on my next birthday!) |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Oh Debbie, this is nicely put... great work... regards, sudhir |
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