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tracie66
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0 posted 2000-09-07 02:26 AM


I am tormented by a harrowing wind
Deep inside my soul
This harrowing wind is so furious
It's consumed by body whole

It's force has destroyed all of me
Left nothing in it's wake
Wreaked havoc on my heart and soul
Now I have nothing left for it to take

It came upon me suddenly
I had no time to prepare
For all was destoyed
By the wind of my despair



Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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SEA
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1 posted 2000-09-07 02:30 AM


Tracie~this is so beautifully sad.....I hope all is well for you**HUGS**   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


tracie66
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2 posted 2000-09-07 02:35 AM


Dearest Sea~
Thanks hon   never fear all is well, takes alot to keep me from going under.
Thanks for your concern.
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2000-09-07 02:53 AM


Ah, Tracie...

seeing you around after a longish time...

and you have returned with a great poem here...

regards,
sudhir

tracie66
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4 posted 2000-09-08 01:34 AM


Hello Dear Sudhir  
Yep I'm back   thanks for your sweet reply.
See ya
Love Tracie


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-09-08 07:05 AM


Tracie~

I would hold the winds at bay
that would even begin
to keep you away
from this family
that holds you dear
On gentle breezes I send
a word of cheer !


You take care sweet friend !
~*Marge*~


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tracie66
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6 posted 2000-09-08 10:04 PM


Marge~
My dear friend you have brought tears to my eyes with your beautiful reply
Thanks hon
HUGS OO
Tracie xx

Tender your verse
Tender your poem
What wonderful thoughts
You've just sown    

Thanks Marge

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


X Angel
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7 posted 2000-09-08 10:09 PM


I experienced this Harrowing Wind on last Friday, it was horrible. But trust me....you will survive, just get some makeup on, buy some Eternity perfume, curl your hair and say to heck with the world...
LOL
~Heather

[This message has been edited by X Angel (edited 09-08-2000).]

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8 posted 2000-09-09 07:53 PM


tracie,
       it is so wonderful to see you back. . . you have been missed. . .  

I know that you can withstand the "Harrowing wind" for you are strong. . . and we are here to help should you need us. . .

Excellent poem my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


tracie66
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9 posted 2000-09-11 05:11 AM


Heather~
You just kick #@&! don't ya girl
I love what you had to say and thanks hon

Tracie~

Sven~
My pal  
Glad to have been missed and I know you are here for me along with many others and I thank you from the bottom of my heart
Love Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Kit McCallum
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10 posted 2000-09-11 07:14 AM


Wonderfully descriptive Tracie! Beautifully composed theme, very nicely done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

tracie66
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11 posted 2000-09-13 03:06 AM


Kit~
Thanks very much for your lovely words...they mean alot  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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