Open Poetry #9 |
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My Heart Opens |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA ![]() |
My heart opens As I lay here, watching you sleep Listening your peaceful even breaths My heart opens When I hear your soft voice Whispering words of your love My heart opens When I see your green eyes Lighting up in a smile My heart opens Hearing your laughter That warms me within My heart opens Feeling your soft touch Giving pleasure I’ve never known My heart opens As I dream of our future together How lucky I am that because of you My heart opens |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
ah..and this opens my heart! ![]() so lovely and sincere! |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
poutprincess - I'm glad you liked it. I wrote about someone very special to me. I'm glad it came across as sincere as I feel. ![]() |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
rosepetals... This is bursting with sincerity! Great writing...short and powerful! Tony ![]() |
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