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Hmm, No Title -> Suggestions? Birthday Delight
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Hmm, No Title -> Suggestions? Birthday Delight |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
My birthday sky radiates, sunbeams shining thru Clouds abound, all around a rainbow colored hue I look toward the sunset, enveloped with delight The sun bids birthday wishes, then kisses me good-nite < !signature--> Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching... [This message has been edited by HM3 (edited 08-01-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely! Is it your birthday? If so, Happy Birthday! How about 'Birthday Delight' for a title? Denise |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
good title suggestion, cute poem, Happy Birth Day! Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was just lovely HM3 ... perfect sentiments for a happy birthday day!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
No, it isn't my birthday today but, I got the most incredible sunset on my birthday! It had bright sunbeams  and rainbow colors. It was the best sunset I have ever seen.  Truely a gift. |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
nice little piece here, HM3 ... how bout "Sunset Gifts" thanks ... |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Hmmm well happy birthday ifi t is your birthday...how about "Birthday Skies" I don't know just a suggestion!!  Julie :) |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
ah, good things do come in small packages! short and sweet...just lovely! |
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