Walking Tall (repost) - A Story of Domination and Intimidation

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Walking Tall (repost) - A Story of Domination and Intimidation

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

0 posted 2000-09-06 12:55 PM

A True Story

The last time that we fought,
I had you down on your knees.
I refused to give in to you and
To your insistent pleas.

So you crawled ever closer,
But I pulled back instead.
I refused to satisfy you,
By listening to what you said.

You lifted up your hands,
You begged me to come near.
Your requests that I yield an inch,
Fell on my deafened ears.

I firmly retained my position,
I refused your every demand,
That I crawl out from under our bed,
And fight you like a man.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2000-09-06 01:17 PM

LOL..ok..had me ready to do the 'move to Adult Forum' thing here...but I loved this! VERY funny!

X Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-11-07

Posts 1521
Oregon

2 posted 2000-09-06 01:27 PM

omg....I did it again...I smiled!
This was cute...

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

3 posted 2000-09-06 01:38 PM

on occasions like this my friend let me just say..

I'll stand behind you
till your belly's beat blue
and when you run
I will too

lol

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2000-09-06 01:51 PM

  LJA....
         This is wonderful!!!!!  Every married man would get a kick out of this one!
                   Nice job!!

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

5 posted 2000-09-06 02:12 PM

Ms deVine - Thank you for holding your fire. Naturally, we must not let lil Lorelei see this poem, as she will want to set the record straight.

Heather - If this poem brought a smile to that beautiful face of yours, then my day is complete. Hang in there, sweet lady. Smiles are on the way... I can see them coming over the hill and they will be with you soon.

Hawk - I knew I could count on you to take a ringside seat - lol.

lil Sunny One - We men are so downtrodden by the women of the world *woeful eyes* I'm glad you enjoyed.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

6 posted 2000-09-06 04:27 PM

Long John why you hiding
under the bed there
Lorelie don't want to fight
she only want to scare
if you never match her
how can you ever know
if you can ever scratch her
hide of coarse hippo
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Lorelei54
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 458

7 posted 2000-09-06 04:42 PM

huh? about the hide of coarse hippo???
I don't get it

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2000-09-06 04:42 PM

Long John--If we could just bottle your sense of humor, think what a smile of a world this would be...

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